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RulesThis is a discussion on Topic of Week: ~**...Saraab...**~ within the Bait Bazi forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Dasht-e-tanhaee maiN ai jaan-e-jahaaN larzaaN hai Teri aavaaz kay saaey, teray hontoN kay saraab Dasht-e-tanhaee maiN dooree kay khas-o-khaak talay ...
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#71
07-24-2003, 11:16 PM
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Dasht-e-tanhaee maiN ai jaan-e-jahaaN larzaaN hai Teri aavaaz kay saaey, teray hontoN kay saraab Dasht-e-tanhaee maiN dooree kay khas-o-khaak talay Khil rahay haiN teray pehloo kay saman or gulaab Uth rahee hai kaheeN qurbat say teri saaNs kee aanch Apnee khushboo maiN sulagti hooee madham madham Door ufaq paar chamaktee hooee qatra qatra Gir rahee hai teri dildaar nazar kee shabnam Is qadar payaar say ai jaan-e-jahaaN rakha hai Dil kay rukhsaar pay is waqt teri yaad naiN haath YooN gumaaN hota hai gerchay hai abhee subh-e-firaaq Dhal gaya hijr ka din aa bhi gaee wasl ki raat                  |
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#72
07-24-2003, 11:18 PM
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Bhai Jee.. yeah pehlay posth oo chuki hai... /frog PS: Bhai jee jaan kay kaha hai tapaanay kay liyeah... as yeah 3rd time post kee hai aapn nay.. sab say pehlay Fahad (sleepless) nay kee phir Umeed nay kee.. aur aab aap nay... 
__________________ Baray Udaas Din Hein.. Aur Soogwar Rattein... !! jazboon ka khuda jazba mohabbat naam hai jis ka kaya dhal lafzoon mein sakta hai ? samandar kaya kabhi koi koozay mein samaya hai? |
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#73
07-25-2003, 03:00 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 11:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 11:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> teray ishq sarab samandar main ikk muddat say main piyasi hon qatra qatra piyas main teri main lehron lehron bikhri hon tab tum nay hath barhaya hai laikin yeh bhi socho na! Pani! kis kay hath aya hai ? [/b][/quote] Haq hai.. Haq hai... Pani! kis kay hath aya hai ? Bohat khoubsourat Sawan... Bohat payaree see nazam hai... dil choo janay wali.. @};- [/b][/quote] Thank You Basit bhai :blush /baby /flowers |
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#74
07-25-2003, 03:10 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 06:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 06:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Bhai Jee.. yeah pehlay posth oo chuki hai... /frog PS: Bhai jee jaan kay kaha hai tapaanay kay liyeah... as yeah 3rd time post kee hai aapn nay.. sab say pehlay Fahad (sleepless) nay kee phir Umeed nay kee.. aur aab aap nay... [/b][/quote]Sorry ji.. me ko pata hi nahi chala... /aw |
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#75
07-25-2003, 03:39 AM
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aik Punjabi nazam hai....... ajeeb din nay ajeeb raatan na gulshana wich gulab mehkan na dasht andar sarab dehkan na shaam wailay sharab labhay na koi sohni kitab labhay na mairay dil noon malal koi na mairay andar jalal koi na uzn daiway hazooriyan day na hukm laway o doriyan day na koi na'ara habeeb wallon na koi hamla raqeeb wallon ajeeeeeb din nay ajeeb raatan |
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#76
07-25-2003, 03:58 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 25 2003, 07:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 25 2003, 07:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> aik Punjabi nazam hai....... ajeeb din nay ajeeb raatan na gulshana wich gulab mehkan na dasht andar sarab dehkan na shaam wailay sharab labhay na koi sohni kitab labhay na mairay dil noon malal koi na mairay andar jalal koi na uzn daiway hazooriyan day na hukm laway o doriyan day na koi na'ara habeeb wallon na koi hamla raqeeb wallon ajeeeeeb din nay ajeeb raatan [/b][/quote] (l) ... bahut khob Sawan ji ;) ... per kise pechay din raat e ajeeb kiun honday nain?? /thinking /thinking /thinking |
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#77
07-25-2003, 04:54 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 25 2003, 07:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 25 2003, 07:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 25 2003, 07:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 25 2003, 07:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> aik Punjabi nazam hai....... ajeeb din nay ajeeb raatan na gulshana wich gulab mehkan na dasht andar sarab dehkan na shaam wailay sharab labhay na koi sohni kitab labhay na mairay dil noon malal koi na mairay andar jalal koi na uzn daiway hazooriyan day na hukm laway o doriyan day na koi na'ara habeeb wallon na koi hamla raqeeb wallon ajeeeeeb din nay ajeeb raatan [/b][/quote] (l) ... bahut khob Sawan ji ;) ... per kise pechay din raat e ajeeb kiun honday nain?? /thinking /thinking /thinking [/b][/quote] THanks JiNN /flowers  s s |
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#78
07-25-2003, 06:32 AM
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uff.. basit itna mushkil topic.. khear fav hai mera mager inna mushkil /hammer ... Aisey na thay ehul-e-dil ' itney kahaan kharaab thay hum bhi kisi ki aas thay hum bhi kisi ke khwaab thay ub ju howe hein khear se raandaa' khaliq-e-shehur hum chehra shub ka noor thay' sheehsaey fun ki aab thay dil pe kisi ke naqsh thay surat-e-harf-e-arzoo os ki kitaab-e-zeest mein laayiq-e-intesaab thay aisi thein wuh rafaqatein ' jaisey hum apney aap mein rang-e-shu'aa mehur thay ' raeza aftaab thay waadon ka aik shehur jis se guzar rahe thay hum ankhein khoolein tao dour tuk' hur soo wuhi SERAAB thay dil sa chiraagh kya bujha ' ankhein dhuwaan dhuwaan howein kehne ko apney aas paas kitney hi mahtaab thay (aetabaar sajid) |
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#79
07-25-2003, 06:42 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 25 2003, 01:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 25 2003, 01:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 06:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 06:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--><center> Kaha nahi tha woh shehar e aasaib hai ... tum ous ki taraf na jaou .. wahan yeh ruhoon ko barf jismoon main ... dafan karnay ki rasam sardiyoon say chal rahi hai ...x wahan pay ankhain hanuut kar kay bhi loog sarkoun pay ghoomtay hain .. wahan to sinoon main patharon kay hain dil muqeed... jo dharkanoon say hain aisay aari ... bina haqeeqat "Saraab" jaisay ... baigher khushbu gulaab jaisay ... Kaha nahi tha woh shehar e aasaib hai ... tum ous ki taraf na jaou .. wahan tou khowaboun ka khoon kar kay bhi loog neendoun say khayltay hain... wahan to jazboun ki fasal paknay ki dair hai bas ... kharay kharay hi zamana eiska kharaaj mangay ... wahan ka aa'ien hai azal say .. koi bhi jazba mohabatoon ka pinp na paey... tum aaj zakhmoonk ay eis khazane ko .. apnay hathoon ki thaliyoon main .. sajaey hairaat zada say kyon ho ?? tumahri ankhoon ki putliyoon main likha hoa yeh azaab kyon hai ?? gehen zada sa..x mohabatoun ka bataou yeh aaftab kyon hai ?? ... yehi to tum say kaha tha Janan ! woh shehar e aasaib hai ... tum ous ki taraf na jaou .. </center>[/b][/quote] yehi to tum say kaha tha Janan ! woh shehar e aasaib hai ... tum ous ki taraf na jaou .. Kabhi kabhi kuch battain.. kuch nazmain.. kuch lafaz.. kuch rishtay... toleed ka bais hootay hain.. shaid aisi hee aik yeah nazam thi.. jo yeah kuch lines abhi likhi hain.. !! shaid jo tum nay share kiya.. uss kay baad ke baat hai iss mein... @};- <center> Yehi tu TUM say kaha tha Janan...!! Woh shakhas jo tum ko bha gaya hai..!! Shehar e Aasaib say ayaa howa hai..!! Kahaan suna Par tum nay maira... !! Aab yeah Zard rungat liyeah jo ho tum..!! Aur haseen Ankhoon mein tumhari.. !! Woh Khawab Saray Jo Thiraak Rahay thai..!! Woh Khawb Saray jo Jaal Chukkay Hain..!! Aab Raakh unkee jo Kuraid'tay hoo..!! Kabhi soochna jo ho sakay tu..!! Woh bahaar mousam Tu jaa chuka hai..!! Saraab Lamhay tu khoo chukay hain..!! Jo Aabgeenoon mein guzar rahi thi..!! Woh Heyaat bhi ab tu roo rahi hai.. !! Aur Yeah Dard Saray ...!! Yeah Zakham Saray..!! Jo Sajaaye Seenay Phir rahay hoo..!! Maseeha inka nahi hai koi..!! Yehi tu TUM say kaha tha Janan..!! Woh Shakhas jo tum ko bha gaya hai..!! Shehar e Aasaib say ayaa howa hai..!! </center> [/b][/quote] WAH ... rubi .... /thinking .. abre dinu baad nazur aayi ho tum sos mein :p ... aur kya master pc laay ho .. khear ... buhat pyari nazum hai ... aur yeh ju basit ne share ki wuh bhi ... Basit ki tao kya hi kehne :p ... such hai Woh Shakhas jo tum ko bha gaya hai..!! Shehar e Aasaib say ayaa howa hai..!! hmmm .... Biya |
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#80
07-25-2003, 04:19 PM
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Arz kiya hai “Yeh Nasha bhi kaisa Yeh haleth bhi kaisi Nazar uthahi Tho yeh Dard-e-Dil bhi kaisa Anjh ke samnai Dekhoun hus ko Andaz hai hus ka Tho yeh Fiterath bhi kaisi Nasha bhi ajeeb Peehoun bhi is ko Charthi bhi nahi Tho yeh nasha bhi kaisa Doboloun apnai aap ko Is Sharab-e-Nasha mein Izhar-e-Mohabbat karloun Tho pir bhi yeh nasha bhi kaisa“ |
