Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal_81+Jul 24 2003, 09:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal_81 @ Jul 24 2003, 09:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 24 2003, 08:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 24 2003, 08:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

terayx ishq sarab samandar main
ikk muddat say main piyasi hon
qatra qatra piyas main teri
main lehron lehron bikhri hon
tab tum nay hath barhaya hai
laikin yeh bhi socho na!
Pani! kis kay hath aya hai ?
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/flower YAR YE TO WORD HI ITNA HASEEN HE KE TUM LOG KAMAL KI TANG TODNE MAIN MASROOF HO


WONDER FULL HE YE BHI @};-

MAGAR KOI APNA BHI TO KUCH LIKHE NA.............. /flower [/b][/quote]


kia pata koi kar bhi raha ho .. ap apna likhiyay ..waiting :blush /flower /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 25 2003, 12:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 25 2003, 12:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hi na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]
achi nazm hai

<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 03:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 03:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 05:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 05:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
ksi ibteda or intehaa ... kay darmiyaan hay zindagi ..
jahan eis taraf na ous taraf .. door tak kahin kuch nahi ...
jaisay door kahin ksi reh guzar .. kay beech o beech koi ajnabi ...
dhool main khoo kay rastoon ko ...&nbsp; hichkiyoon say roo paray ...
jisay reh guzar ki garam rait ... or asmaan ko chor kar ...
nazar ki tamam wusatoon main aur kuch na mil sakay ...&nbsp;
dhoop ki tamazatoun ki intehaa ki woh sar zameen ...
jahan hasratoon kay beej say faqat " SARAAB " hi khil sakay
ous ajnabi ki pyaas kia .. umeed kia or yaas kia ...
bajuz ajal ka intezaar ...&nbsp; aur bacha hai ous kay paas kya !

eis ibteda or intehaa kay darmiyaan to main bhi hoon ..
eis ibtedaa or inteha kay darmiyaan tou tu bhi hai ..
jaisay door khain jangaloon main .. rail ki dou patriyaan ..
jo qurbatoun ki anginat raat o din kay bawajood...
eik hath bhar kay faslay say .. rah guzar main bat gaeen ...
Aah ! kay mil baithnay ki woh shabnami si hasratain ..
jo zaviyoon ki hair phiar ki ganjalon main phans gaeen ..
ein intehaoon kay darmiyaan ki sitam zareefi daikhiyay ...
jo chandni say khowaab thay woh rastoon main kho diyay ..
jo siskiyoon kay azaab thay .. woh zindagi ko day diyay ... !



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I must admit I dont have words to express my feeling for this beautiful poem... yeah poem.. pehli baaar parhi mein nay... aik baar parhi .. tu ajeeb see feeling hoi.. soocha shaid.. kay waisay hee woh aik hooti hai na halat e dil. .tu shaid uss ka asar hai kay kuch ziada hee zoor laga kay lagi hai.. tu banta dhayaan.. phir aa kay parhi.. jo is akhri kuch lines hain.. 3 lines infact.. waisay tu har line he iss ke bohat khoubsouart hai.. do hisoon mein bati hoi.. do hisoon mein bant'ti hoi.. wajhain batati hoi.. bayaan kari hoi halat e dill.. bohat umdaah nazam hai.. kuch kehnay ko nahi hai... buss yeahi kay.. iss qadar dil say likhi hoi nazam parhai aap nay.. hum tah e dil say shukar guzar hain.. @};- [/b][/quote]



mujhay pata tha apko bohot pasand aey gi @};- .... or ap kay bolnay kay bad khud main nay bhi parhi hai wapis .... woh aesa kuch sun nay kay baad eik naey zaviyay say cheez nazar ati hai na ... kuch aesa hi samjhiyay .... tah e dil say say mashkoor to main bhi hoon ............ @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hi na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]



mashaAllah .... /flower /flower .. save kar li main nay /wink ... @};- kia kuch soochnay pay majboor kar dia hai /confused ...

<!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hi&nbsp; na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]



mashaAllah .... /flower /flower .. save kar li main nay /wink ... @};- kia kuch soochnay pay majboor kar dia hai /confused ...



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jee aap ki wali bhi kam nahin thee.... save to kia karti abhi main is ko likhon gi khood apnay hathon say .... aik sec walay save main mujhay mazza nahin aaye ga....

<!--QuoteBegin-NainTara+Jul 24 2003, 02:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 24 2003, 02:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 25 2003, 12:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 25 2003, 12:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hi&nbsp; na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]
achi nazm hai [/b][/quote]
thanx

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hix na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]



mashaAllah .... /flower /flower .. save kar li main nay /wink ... @};- kia kuch soochnay pay majboor kar dia hai /confused ...



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jee aap ki wali bhi kam nahin thee.... save to kia karti abhi main is ko likhon gi khood apnay hathon say .... aik sec walay save main mujhay mazza nahin aaye ga.... [/b][/quote]



jee jee .... madam ab yeh humara qasoor to nahi kay ap ki kheir say "TRAINING" hi shuro nahi hoi hai abtak .. warna eik sec wlay save ki lazatoun ka bhi pata chal jata /jin ... :-p

<!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hix na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]



mashaAllah .... /flower /flower .. save kar li main nay /wink ... @};- kia kuch soochnay pay majboor kar dia hai /confused ...



[/b][/quote]
jee aap ki wali bhi kam nahin thee.... save to kia karti abhi main is ko likhon gi khood apnay hathon say .... aik sec walay save main mujhay mazza nahin aaye ga.... [/b][/quote]



jee jee .... madam ab yeh humara qasoor to nahi kay ap ki kheir say "TRAINING" hi shuro nahi hoi hai abtak .. warna eik sec wlay save ki lazatoun ka bhi pata chal jata /jin ... :-p



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chaliye app kahti hain to main is aik sec walay save ki lazzat bhi mahsoos kar kar dekhti hoon ..... warna apnay hathon say main likh chuki ab.... :p

<center>utareen ajeeb rooshniyaan raat khawb mein
kaya kaya na akss tair rahay thai saraab mein

Kab say hain ek harf pey nazrain jameen hoiyeen
Vo parh raha hoon jo nahi likhaa kitaab mein..

Phir tairgee ke khawb se chaunka hai raasta
phir rooshni see door gai hai sahaab mein..

Paani nahi kay apnay he chahray ko daikh loon
Manzar Zameen ke dhoondta hoon maahtaab mein

Kab tak rahegaa rooh pay pairhaan e badan
Kaab tak havaa aseer rahay gi hubaab mein

Jeenay kay saath mout kaa dar hai laga howa..
Khushki dikhayee dee hai samandar ko khawb mein

Ek Yaad Hai Kay Cheen Rahi Hai Laboon Say Jaam
Ek Aks Hai kay Kaanp Raha Hai sarab Mein</center>

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 02:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 24 2003, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~

tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain
judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si
december june lagta hai
kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai
tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi
aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi
na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh
abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna
tumharay lams kay zinda warq par
tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main
magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain
kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi
tumhara lams mar jaye
gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye
kahin aisa na ho jana'n!!
ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye
kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay
main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hix na mar jaa'on
yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye
abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai
abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai
"sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai
abhi hai waqt muthi main
agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par
tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha
yeh sara waqt girnay
meray haatho'n say bahnay say
zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to
agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> [/b][/quote]



mashaAllah .... /flower /flower .. save kar li main nay /wink ... @};- kia kuch soochnay pay majboor kar dia hai /confused ...



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jee aap ki wali bhi kam nahin thee.... save to kia karti abhi main is ko likhon gi khood apnay hathon say .... aik sec walay save main mujhay mazza nahin aaye ga.... [/b][/quote]



jee jee .... madam ab yeh humara qasoor to nahi kay ap ki kheir say "TRAINING" hi shuro nahi hoi hai abtak .. warna eik sec wlay save ki lazatoun ka bhi pata chal jata /jin ... :-p



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chaliye app kahti hain to main is aik sec walay save ki lazzat bhi mahsoos kar kar dekhti hoon ..... warna apnay hathon say main likh chuki ab.... :p [/b][/quote]



ji to kesa mehsoos kar raheen hain ap /loser ... /hah /hah ... :-p