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This is a discussion on Topic of Week: ~**...Saraab...**~ within the Bait Bazi forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; <!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td> QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ...
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#41
07-24-2003, 07:31 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 24 2003, 03:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> teray ishq sarab samandar main ikk muddat say main piyasi hon qatra qatra piyas main teri main lehron lehron bikhri hon tab tum nay hath barhaya hai laikin yeh bhi socho na! Pani! kis kay hath aya hai ? [/b][/quote] Haq hai.. Haq hai... Pani! kis kay hath aya hai ? Bohat khoubsourat Sawan... Bohat payaree see nazam hai... dil choo janay wali.. @};-         |
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#42
07-24-2003, 07:33 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-KhiGirl+Jul 24 2003, 03:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (KhiGirl @ Jul 24 2003, 03:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Badalte Hain hamsafar raastaa badalte haiN pyaas badlii, ghataa badalte haiN. wohi sahraa rahaa, wohi haiN saraab bas kabhi kaarwan badalte haiN khlq ham se nahiin badaltaa to khair ab aasmaaN badalte haiN. bandh kamre men baith kar dekho, kitne mausam wahaaN badalte HaiN yun sifat se hamen bhulaa bhi chuke jaise apnaa kahaa badalte haiN. kuchh nayaapan nahiin sitam men tere ham to yun hii gilaa badalte haiN. kal yeh chehre ka kijiye gaa kya? aaj to aa'inaa badalte haiN. taak, taqreeri, eKHlaaq, maqaam, dekhiye aur kya badalte haiN. muttafiq ho len unki hujjat se woh tab hi faisalaa badalte haiN. baat karte ho aur dekheN hamen dost laheje zaraa badlte haiN. ham to shaayad bhule the su-e-namaaz unko dekho - khuda badalte haiN. is mohalle men koi jaan gayaa phir se apnaa pataa badalte haiN. dard kya hai - bataa nahiin sakte roz aa kar dawaa badalte haiN. kaun martaa hai yeh pataa jo chale log fauran dua badalte haiN. aakhri waqt yaad kya aaya? kyun hamaari sazaa badalte haiN? [/b][/quote] Asalam o Alaikum @};- Bohat khoubsouart KhiGirl Jee.. Keep sharing.. and thanks for sharing this lovely ghazal with all of us... /flower |
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#43
07-24-2003, 07:41 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 11:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 11:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-NainTara+Jul 23 2003, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 23 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> hmm..saraab Yeh joo khwaahishoun ka parindaa hai issey mausamoun sey gharaz nahin Yeh urrey gaa apni hi mauj mein, issey aabb dey ke saraab dey [/b][/quote] Aadaab arz hai Naina... yeah jo khawahishoon ka paranda hai.. sahi kaha.. kay yeah khawahishoon ka paranda bus iss ko urnay say gharz hai.. par yeah jab raat dhalay thak kay girata hai ... tu baad uss kay kaisa mazoor hoo jata hai... dobara kabhi urnay say mazoor... magar sahi kaha... yeah khawahishain hee hain jo saraboon mein aab ke khooj karti hain.. par aab kab sarab mein millta hai... 1.gif ")1") [/b][/quote]Basit ik baat bataain...Writers club SOS , jahaan jaati hoon...aisaa lag raha hai sab saraab per likhh rahey hain..likhhtey hi jaa rahey hain...pata nahin yaa shayed mujhey lag raha hai  koi Aab per bhi tou likhey .. |
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#44
07-24-2003, 07:42 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 11:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 11:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 23 2003, 10:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 23 2003, 10:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ganwaa dee umrr faqat ek saraab kay peechay chakorr jaisay dewaana hai maahtaab kay peechay samet-tay hain gunaah hum to jholian bhar kar chalaa hai jub say zamaana sawaab kay peechay jo jaag jaaooon to dunya na dekhnay daen gay jo so raha hoon to hain meray khaawb kay peechay teray khayaal ki hiddatt na raakh kar day mujhay panaah lenay chalaa hoon main aaftaab kay peechay [/b][/quote] Bhai sahib.. yeah jo aik line hai na.. iss ghazal kee.. !! ganwaa dee umrr faqat ek saraab kay peechay Jee yeah wali.. tu janaab haan shaid aisa hee hai.. ganwa di umar faqat ik saraab kay peechay.. wah.. bohat dil ko choo janay wali line hai yeah.. bohat umdaah.. aur bohat shukriya aisee khoubsourat ghazal saraab kay topic pay share karnay pay @};- [/b][/quote] Bhai sahib..nahin Behen sahibaa hai yeh :p |
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#45
07-24-2003, 07:44 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Umeed Ki Kiran+Jul 24 2003, 04:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Umeed Ki Kiran @ Jul 24 2003, 04:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Dasht-e-Tanhaye mein..Aay jaan e jahaN lerzaaN hain... Tairy Aawaaz k saaye...tairay HontoN k "Saraab"... Dasht e tanhaye mein doory k kas o khaak talay.. Khil rahay haiN ..tairay pehlu k saman or gulaab.. Uth rahi hai kaheeN qurbat say...tery saNs ki Aanch.. Apni khushbu mein sulagty hoi.. madham.. madham.. door..ufaq paar...chamankty hoi qatra qatra... gir rahi hai..tery dildaar nazar ki shabnam.. Is qader pyar say...aay Jaan e JahaN..rekha hai.. Dil k rukhsaar peh ..is waqt tery yaad nay haat YooN gumaN hota hai..ger cheh hai abhi subh e furaaq.. dhal gaya hijr ka din..aa bhi gaye...wasl ki raat.. [/b][/quote] Faiz sahib ke aik khoubsouart tareen shahkaar.. kuch lines hain jo zahaan mein goonjnay lagi hain... zabat ka ehad bhi hai.. shouq ka payman bhi hai ehad o payman say guzar janay ko jee chahta hai ... dard itna kay har rug mein hai mehshar parba.. aur sakoon aisa kay mar jaanay ko jee chahta hai.. !! @};- |
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#46
07-24-2003, 07:49 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 02:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 02:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 23 2003, 10:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 23 2003, 10:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> meri rooh me jo utter saken,wo mohabatten mujhe chahiyen jo saraab hon na azaab hon,wo rafaaqaten mujhe chahiyen unhi sa-uatton ki tallash he, jo calenderon se utter gayin jo samey k saath guzer gayin,wohi fursatten mujhe chahiyen kaheen mil saken to samet laa,mere roz-o-shub ki kahaniyan jo gubaar-e-waqt me chup gayin,wo hikaayaten mujhe chahiyen jo meri shabon k chiraagh the,jo meri umeed k baagh the wohi log hen meri aarzoo,wohi sooraten mujhe chahiyen teri qurbaten nahin chahiyen,meri sha-e-ri k mizaaj ko mujhe faaslon se dawaam de,teri furqaten mujhe chahiyen mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye,ye duaaen hen mere saaiban karri dhoop me kahin mil saken,to yehi chatten mujhe chahiyen [/b][/quote] meri rooh me jo utter saken,wo mohabatten mujhe chahiyen jo saraab hon na azaab hon,wo rafaaqaten mujhe chahiyen Kin saraboon mein jiyeah jaa rahay hain sahib aap... kahaan miltee hain.. kaya chahnay baith gai hain aap.. yeah tu sara sar ik sarab hai.. aik aisa haseen sarab kay jo apnay hisaar mein jakar lay... tu phir khud apnay haath say payaala zahar peeta hai insaan.. !! /happy [/b][/quote] abhi ein mohterma nay aa kay cheekh o pukaar shuro kar dayni hai .. kyon bar bar eik hi sitam dhatay hain .. shayed eik baar pehlay bhi apko bata chukeen hain mohterma kay sanf e nazuk waqei hoi hain kheir say :-p ... |
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#47
07-24-2003, 07:55 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 02:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 02:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 23 2003, 11:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 23 2003, 11:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center> Teri qurbatain bhi "saraab" hain..x yeh bhala hoa jo nahi mileen ... teri dooriyaan bhi azaab hain .... meri dasht e jaan say tali nahin ... Kisi aag nay woh dhuaan dia ... mujhay daikhnay bhi kahan dia ... Wo musafatoon ka jahan dia ... kahin rasta hai kahin nahi ... mujhay zindagi woh diyaa lagay ... kay abhi bujhay jo hava lagay .. kabhi kia lagay kabhi kia lagay .... ksi zaviyay pay yaqeen nahi .... kay shikasta paa main rukoon kahan ... yeh hai fasloon ka neyaa jahaan ... hai agarx zameen.. nahi aasmaan ...hai jo aasmaan to zameen nahi .. Pas e chashm e nam woh zarror hai ... mera dil jafaoon say choor hai ... Meri manziloon ka qasoor hai ... Teray rastoon say mileen nahi .... </center> [/b][/quote] <center>Meri manziloon ka qasoor hai ... Teray rastoon say mileen nahi /protest /protest /protest /protest /protest /protest </center> [/b][/quote] <center> Rahay sath sath har pal ... na gumaan hoa yeh mil kar ... Jisay dosti thay kehtay .... woh kuch or silsilay hain ... Yeh "Saraab" to nahi hain ... koi khowab to nahi hain ... Zara ap hi bataeen .... yeh jo hum main faslay hain ... nahi mumkin ous ko panaa ... tou phir ous say kyon milain hum ... karain justujo bhi kyon hum ... eis sooch main paray hain ... "Arif" qurbatoon say pehlay ... zara jurratoun say pehlay .. meri jaan sooch layna kay yeh rastay karay hain .... </center> |
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#48
07-24-2003, 08:07 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal_81+Jul 24 2003, 09:55 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal_81 @ Jul 24 2003, 09:55 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 04:14 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 04:14 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center> Teri qurbatain bhi "saraab" hain.. yeh bhala hoa jo nahi mileen ... teri dooriyaan bhi azaab hain .... meri dasht e jaan say tali nahin ... Kisi aag nay woh dhuaan dia ... mujhay daikhnay bhi kahan dia ... Wo musafatoon ka jahan dia ... kahin rasta hai kahin nahi ... mujhay zindagi woh diyaa lagay ... kay abhi bujhay jo hava lagay .. kabhi kia lagay kabhi kia lagay .... ksi zaviyay pay yaqeen nahi .... kay shikasta paa main rukoon kahan ... yeh hai fasloon ka neyaa jahaan ... hai agar zameen.. nahi aasmaan ...hai jo aasmaan to zameen nahi .. Pas e chashm e nam woh zarror hai ... mera dil jafaoon say choor hai ... Meri manziloon ka qasoor hai ... Teray rastoon say mileen nahi .... </center> [/b][/quote] TERI QURBATAIN BHI SARAB THIN............. YE BHALA HUA KE MILI NAHI................ ...... MERE DASHT-E-JAN SE TALI NAHI............... AIK AIK LINE GHAZAB KI HE VERY VERY NICE................ .. @};- [/b][/quote] /flower /flower /flower :blush |
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#49
07-24-2003, 08:10 PM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 24 2003, 05:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 24 2003, 05:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center> ksi ibteda or intehaa ... kay darmiyaan hay zindagi .. jahan eis taraf na ous taraf .. door tak kahin kuch nahi ... jaisay door kahin ksi reh guzar .. kay beech o beech koi ajnabi ... dhool main khoo kay rastoon ko ... hichkiyoon say roo paray ... jisay reh guzar ki garam rait ... or asmaan ko chor kar ... nazar ki tamam wusatoon main aur kuch na mil sakay ... dhoop ki tamazatoun ki intehaa ki woh sar zameen ... jahan hasratoon kay beej say faqat " SARAAB " hi khil sakay ous ajnabi ki pyaas kia .. umeed kia or yaas kia ... bajuz ajal ka intezaar ... aur bacha hai ous kay paas kya ! eis ibteda or intehaa kay darmiyaan to main bhi hoon .. eis ibtedaa or inteha kay darmiyaan tou tu bhi hai .. jaisay door khain jangaloon main .. rail ki dou patriyaan .. jo qurbatoun ki anginat raat o din kay bawajood... eik hath bhar kay faslay say .. rah guzar main bat gaeen ... Aah ! kay mil baithnay ki woh shabnami si hasratain .. jo zaviyoon ki hair phiar ki ganjalon main phans gaeen .. ein intehaoon kay darmiyaan ki sitam zareefi daikhiyay ... jo chandni say khowaab thay woh rastoon main kho diyay .. jo siskiyoon kay azaab thay .. woh zindagi ko day diyay ... ! </center> [/b][/quote] I must admit I dont have words to express my feeling for this beautiful poem... yeah poem.. pehli baaar parhi mein nay... aik baar parhi .. tu ajeeb see feeling hoi.. soocha shaid.. kay waisay hee woh aik hooti hai na halat e dil. .tu shaid uss ka asar hai kay kuch ziada hee zoor laga kay lagi hai.. tu banta dhayaan.. phir aa kay parhi.. jo is akhri kuch lines hain.. 3 lines infact.. waisay tu har line he iss ke bohat khoubsouart hai.. do hisoon mein bati hoi.. do hisoon mein bant'ti hoi.. wajhain batati hoi.. bayaan kari hoi halat e dill.. bohat umdaah nazam hai.. kuch kehnay ko nahi hai... buss yeahi kay.. iss qadar dil say likhi hoi nazam parhai aap nay.. hum tah e dil say shukar guzar hain.. @};- |
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#50
07-24-2003, 08:11 PM
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<center> ~tujh bin zaat adhoori hai~ tumhari aas kay gamlo'n main rakhay phool murjhanay lagay hain judaaye dhoop lagti hai bohat hi taiz chubti si december june lagta hai kissi kay naam ki ghanti bajay mujhay tumhara phone lagta hai tumharay laut aanay tak na janay kis qadar lambi udaasi aankh kay bistar main chup kar raat likhay gi na janay kis qadar sapno'n ko day gi bayghari ka dukh abhi to phir bhi baqi hai koi sapna tumharay lams kay zinda warq par tumhari khusboo'ain zinda hai pholo'n kay badan main magar aisa na ho khushboo'ain baychahragi pahnain kahin aisa na ho kay phool jal jain kissi sapnay kay bhujtay hi tumhara lams mar jaye gulabo'n kay badan main zang lag jaye kahin aisa na ho jana'n!! ana ki surkh tahni par koi talwaaar ug aaye kahin aisa na ho kay soch ki khirki main koi weham aa baithay main is takmeel kay aadhay safar main hi na mar jaa'on yeh mousam jo adhoora hai, adhoora hi na rah jaye abhi to aankh ki mashal mujhay rusta dikhati hai abhi to aaina chahra dikhata hai "sarab" hi sahi jana'a yeh rusta pair kay neechay abhi to aas likhta hai abhi hai waqt muthi main agarchay rait ki manind phislta ja raha hai par tumharay laut aanay tak samnbhalon ka koi lamha yeh sara waqt girnay meray haatho'n say bahnay say zara aik lamha pahlay tak..... agar tum laut aao to agar tum laut aao to meri takmeel ho jaye </center> |
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