Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 23 2003, 10:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 23 2003, 10:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Asalam o Alaikum,

Socha iss baar aik topic mein introduce karta hon.. andaza hai mujh ko kay topic shaid thoora sa hat kay ya toora mushkil sabit hoo.. magar phir bhi... umeed karta hoon kay iss topic pay kuch achi achi nazmain aur ghazlain parhany ko millain gai.. !!! /happy [/b][/quote]
BASIT BHAI BOHAT PIARA TOPIC HE

MAIN BHI ZAROR KUCH LIKHONGI ISS PAR............. @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-NainTara+Jul 23 2003, 05:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 23 2003, 05:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> hmm achaa Topic hai Basit
filhaal ik sher sunaati hoon...


Meri piyaas itni hi berh gaee ke saraab jitney miley mujhey
Huaa dhoukaa jiss pey gulaab kaa, woo sulagtaa jaltaa sharaar thhaa [/b][/quote]
Bohat khobsouart hai Naina.. bohat pasand aya... 2nd line tu buss aisay jaisay... dil ko zubaan mill gai hoo... @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-sLeEpLeSs+Jul 23 2003, 05:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sLeEpLeSs @ Jul 23 2003, 05:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Hasti apni habaab ki see hay ...
Ye numaaish Saraab ki see hay ..

Naazuki uss kay lab ki kya kahiye ..
Pankhari ik gulaab ki see hay ... [/b][/quote]
Jee bhai sahi kaha yeah numaaish sarab kee see hai... !!! @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 23 2003, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 23 2003, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
bisaat-e-shoq smait loon khood hi
kay tera tarz-e-taghafil mujhay gawara nahin
yeh roz roz ki jhuk jhuk yeh sa'ie-e-raaigaa'n
yeh baybasi yeh nahaq jisaarat-e-mizgaa'n
yeh woh safar hai kay manzil koi na jiski ho
meray "sarab" bata mujh ko kia kiya jaye
yeh unkaha sa paimaan-e-ulfat-e-pinhaa'n
wafa jo ho na sakay gar to kia kiya jaye</center> [/b][/quote]
Mairay sarab bata mujh ko ... kaya kiya jaye... sarab bhi kabhi kaya kuch kahtay hain.... sarboon mein ghiray lougoon kay diloon mein bhi kaisi kaisi hasratain jiya karti hain.. @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 01:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 01:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-hasil-e-zeest+Jul 23 2003, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (hasil-e-zeest @ Jul 23 2003, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <center>
bisaat-e-shoq smait loon khood hi
kay tera tarz-e-taghafil mujhay gawara nahin
yeh roz roz ki jhuk jhuk yeh sa'ie-e-raaigaa'n
yeh baybasi yeh nahaq jisaarat-e-mizgaa'n
yeh woh safar hai kay manzil koi na jiski ho
meray "sarab" bata mujh ko kia kiya jaye
yeh unkaha sa paimaan-e-ulfat-e-pinhaa'n
wafa jo ho na sakay gar to kia kiya jaye</center> [/b][/quote]
Mairay sarab bata mujh ko ... kaya kiya jaye... sarab bhi kabhi kaya kuch kahtay hain.... sarboon mein ghiray lougoon kay diloon mein bhi kaisi kaisi hasratain jiya karti hain.. @};- [/b][/quote]
acha bhala sub kuch theek chul raha tha.... aap hi nay aik dum say kal yeh topic shroo kar kay jagaya tha....

<!--QuoteBegin-NainTara+Jul 23 2003, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 23 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> hmm..saraab

Yeh joo khwaahishoun ka parindaa hai issey mausamoun sey gharaz nahin
Yeh urrey gaa apni hi mauj mein, issey aabb dey ke saraab dey [/b][/quote]
Aadaab arz hai Naina... yeah jo khawahishoon ka paranda hai.. sahi kaha.. kay yeah khawahishoon ka paranda bus iss ko urnay say gharz hai.. par yeah jab raat dhalay thak kay girata hai ... tu baad uss kay kaisa mazoor hoo jata hai... dobara kabhi urnay say mazoor... magar sahi kaha... yeah khawahishain hee hain jo saraboon mein aab ke khooj karti hain.. par aab kab sarab mein millta hai...

<!--QuoteBegin-sabeen21+Jul 23 2003, 07:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sabeen21 @ Jul 23 2003, 07:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Guzray Huay Taweel Zamanay Kay Baad Bhi
Dil Main Raha Woh Choor Kay Janay Kay Baad Bhi
Pehlu Main Reh Kay Dil Nay Dia Hai Bohat Faraib
Rakha Hai Us Ko Yaad Bhulanay Kay Baad Bhi
Qurbat Kay Baad Aur Bhi Qurbat Ki Talash
Dil Mutmain Nahin Hai Teray Aanay Kay Baad Bhi
Go Tu Yahan NAhin hai MAger Tu Yahein pay hai
Tera Hi zikar Hai Teray Janay kay Baad Bhi
lagta Hai Kuch Kaha hi Nahin hai ussay Adeem
Dil Ka Tamam Haal Sunanay kay Baad Bhi [/b][/quote]
Bohat achi ghazal parhayee jee aap nay.. go kay sarab nahi hai.. magar hum issi sarab mein parh gai iss ko kay shaid kay mill jaye is mein koi sarab.. magar woh sarab hee kaya kay jiss mein aap ko woh mill jaye jis ke khawahish liyeah aap uss kee aur chaltay hain.. sarab tu akhir sarab hai na.. @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 23 2003, 10:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 23 2003, 10:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ganwaa dee umrr faqat ek saraab kay peechay
chakorr jaisay dewaana hai maahtaab kay peechay

samet-tay hain gunaah hum to jholian bhar kar
chalaa hai jub say zamaana sawaab kay peechay

jo jaag jaaooon to dunya na dekhnay daen gay
jo so raha hoon to hain meray khaawb kay peechay

teray khayaal ki hiddatt na raakh kar day mujhay
panaah lenay chalaa hoon main aaftaab kay peechay
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Bhai sahib.. yeah jo aik line hai na.. iss ghazal kee.. !!

ganwaa dee umrr faqat ek saraab kay peechay

Jee yeah wali.. tu janaab haan shaid aisa hee hai.. ganwa di umar faqat ik saraab kay peechay.. wah.. bohat dil ko choo janay wali line hai yeah.. bohat umdaah.. aur bohat shukriya aisee khoubsourat ghazal saraab kay topic pay share karnay pay @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 23 2003, 10:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 23 2003, 10:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> meri rooh me jo utter saken,wo mohabatten mujhe chahiyen
jo saraab hon na azaab hon,wo rafaaqaten mujhe chahiyen

unhi sa-uatton ki tallash he, jo calenderon se utter gayin
jo samey k saath guzer gayin,wohi fursatten mujhe chahiyen

kaheen mil saken to samet laa,mere roz-o-shub ki kahaniyan
jo gubaar-e-waqt me chup gayin,wo hikaayaten mujhe chahiyen

jo meri shabon k chiraagh the,jo meri umeed k baagh the
wohi log hen meri aarzoo,wohi sooraten mujhe chahiyen

teri qurbaten nahin chahiyen,meri sha-e-ri k mizaaj ko
mujhe faaslon se dawaam de,teri furqaten mujhe chahiyen

mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye,ye duaaen hen mere saaiban
karri dhoop me kahin mil saken,to yehi chatten mujhe chahiyen



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meri rooh me jo utter saken,wo mohabatten mujhe chahiyen
jo saraab hon na azaab hon,wo rafaaqaten mujhe chahiyen


Kin saraboon mein jiyeah jaa rahay hain sahib aap... kahaan miltee hain.. kaya chahnay baith gai hain aap.. yeah tu sara sar ik sarab hai.. aik aisa haseen sarab kay jo apnay hisaar mein jakar lay... tu phir khud apnay haath say payaala zahar peeta hai insaan.. !! /happy

<!--QuoteBegin-Taqdir Ka Fasana+Jul 23 2003, 11:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Taqdir Ka Fasana @ Jul 23 2003, 11:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

<center> Teri qurbatain bhi "saraab" hain.. yeh bhala hoa jo nahi mileen ...
teri dooriyaan bhi azaab hain .... meri dasht e jaan say tali nahin ...

Kisi aag nay woh dhuaan dia ... mujhay daikhnay bhi kahan dia ...
Wo musafatoon ka jahan dia ... kahin rasta hai kahin nahi ...

mujhay zindagi woh diyaa lagay ... kay abhi bujhay jo hava lagay ..
kabhi kia lagay kabhi kia lagay .... ksi zaviyay pay yaqeen nahi ....

kay shikasta paa main rukoon kahan ... yeh hai fasloon ka neyaa jahaan ...
hai agar zameen.. nahi aasmaan ...hai jo aasmaan to zameen nahi ..

Pas e chashm e nam woh zarror hai ... mera dil jafaoon say choor hai ...
Meri manziloon ka qasoor hai ... Teray rastoon say mileen nahi .... </center>



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<center>Meri manziloon ka qasoor hai ... Teray rastoon say mileen nahi







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