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#1 01-12-2004, 06:58 PM

Assalam o Alaikum

January ki bait-bazi thori /ohno shuru kartey hain ...

Rule yeh hai keh last sher mein se koi bhi word le kar us ko sher mein use karna hai ... to ho jayen shuru /flower

<center>To kya yeh teh hai keh ab umar bhar nahi milna
To phir yeh umar hi kyun, tum se gar nahi milna!
Rah-e-wafa ke musafir ko koi samjhaye
Keh is safar mein koi humsafar nahi milna!
</center>

Ab is mein se koi bhi word le kar aap sher sunayen

#2 01-12-2004, 07:11 PM

rah-e-wafa
bohat aasaan sahi rah_e wafa ki manzileen lakin
akaley tum kahan tak jao gey jab ham nahi hoon gey

#3 01-12-2004, 08:05 PM

tum hum safar hoye to hoi zindagi azeez
mujh main to zindagi ka koi hosila na tha

#4 01-13-2004, 03:01 AM

"Zindagi"

Zindagi Tujse Her Sans Pe Samjhota Karon
Shok Jeene Ka Hai Mujko, Magar Itna Tu Nahi ...

#5 01-13-2004, 07:25 AM

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (CuTe ChIcLeT @ Jan 12 2004, 11:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Assalam o Alaikum

January ki bait-bazi thori /ohno shuru kartey hain ...

Rule yeh hai keh last sher mein se koi bhi word le kar us ko sher mein use karna hai ... to ho jayen shuru /flower

<center>To kya yeh teh hai keh ab umar bhar nahi milna
To phir yeh umar hi kyun, tum se gar nahi milna!
Rah-e-wafa ke musafir ko koi samjhaye
Keh is safar mein koi humsafar nahi milna!
</center>

Ab is mein se koi bhi word le kar aap sher sunayen
[/b][/quote]
WOW!

Lo G phir say race shroh.. /iamcoming . bahahal kuchh change to howa na. achhi baat hai /luv

Allah Hafiz

Mirza

#6 01-13-2004, 11:38 AM

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jan 13 2004, 08:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> "Zindagi"

Zindagi Tujse Her Sans Pe Samjhota Karon
Shok Jeene Ka Hai Mujko, Magar Itna Tu Nahi ... [/b][/quote]
zindagi teree ataa thee so tere naam ki hai
hum ne jaisay bhi basar ki tera ehsaan jaana
= Ahmed Faraz

#7 01-13-2004, 01:45 PM

Quote:

Rule yeh hai keh last sher mein se koi bhi word le kar us ko sher mein use karna hai  ... to ho jayen shuru 

/aoa

last sher ya misrah /confuse

Hum

Hum huwe tum huwe ke ~Mir huwe
un ki zulfon ke sab aseer huwe

Allah hafiz

#8 01-13-2004, 02:04 PM

ZULFAIN

apni ZULFAIN samait leejiay ga
mil raha hai kahaniooN ko tuul

#9 01-13-2004, 04:18 PM

" hai "

such hai keh mujh ko aqul ne kuch pokhtugi tao di
per wuh maza kahaan hai ju nadaaniyon mein tha

#10 01-13-2004, 05:57 PM

Kuch ...

Kisi tarah yeh taghaful ka baab-e-shak to khuley
Nahi main pyar ke qabil to kuch saza hi do!

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