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Old 06-12-2008, 11:44 AM
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Friends kase hain aap sab yahan aap ko karna ye hai ke shair ke last lafz jo hoga os lafz se next ane wale ko shair likha hai..........


Ik Chand ki talaash main ghomain nagar nagar
Lotay tu Aasmaan nay sitaray bujha diye..........


next "ye" se

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Ye baat khas nahin,patharoon ki basti mein
Na pooch toot gaya dil ka aaina kaisay
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Ye

Ye baat khas nahin,patharoon ki basti mein
Na pooch toot gaya dil ka aaina kaisay
Ye
Yeh mere zarf ki doulat hai iss kaa zikar na kar
Jigar main dard bhi hai aur aankh num bhi nahin
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Old 06-13-2008, 12:57 PM
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Na koi kisi se door hota hai
Na koi kisi le kareeb hota hai
pyaar to chal kar ata hai
jab koi kisi ke naseeb me hota hai

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Old 06-13-2008, 01:12 PM
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Inhi patharoon pe chal kay agar aa sako tou aaoo
meray ghar kay rastay main koi kehkashaan nahin hai

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isko chaha bi ti izhare mohabat na karna aya
kat gayi umer hume pyar na karna aya
os ne mangi bi to hum se mangi judai
ek hum thy ke inkar na karna aya
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Ab K ajeeb karb mein tujh se juda howay
Rasmi mukaalmain bhi na hum say aada howay
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Old 06-13-2008, 01:42 PM
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yon to hum kisi ka pecha kiya nahi kartey
darde dil liya aur diya nahi kartey
itfaq ki baat hai ke ye dil tum par a geya
warna itbi qimati cheez kisi ko diya nahi kartey

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Yun tou pathar ki bhi taqdeer badal jati hai
Shart yeh hai kay ussay dil say tarasha jaiye
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