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muqabla baitbazi.....Februar y2008

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Old 02-04-2008, 08:25 AM
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Ghayal

Na teer, na talvaar se ghayal hue hain...
Teri sirf ek nazar se, zaalim, Shaayar hue hain....
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Old 02-04-2008, 08:39 AM
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Shayar

Raz jo sina-e fitrat men nihan hota hai

sab se pahle dele shayar pe a-yan hota hai

jitni jitni sitame yar se khata hai shikast

dil jawan, or jawan or jawan hota hai
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Old 02-04-2008, 08:57 AM
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Shikast

Meray hum-nawa teri bey-rukhi dil-e-mubtala ki shikast hai,
Ise kis tarah main kahoon fatah yeh meri ana ki shikast hai....
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Old 02-04-2008, 09:21 AM
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jalalee

" Maine jalalee apna nasib ' jo tum se pyar kiya
Na tum ne kabhi inkar kiya ' na kbhi iqrar kiya "
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jalalee

" Maine jalalee apna nasib ' jo tum se pyar kiya
Na tum ne kabhi inkar kiya ' na kbhi iqjkj kiya "

Brother narain,
U should first read the rules for bait bazi,
u r not following the rules, u have to choose a word from the last sher and then post urs on the same
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Berukhee
ye lafz men cRony/eNemy se le raha hun


Teri berukhee pe zalim mera jee ye chahta hai

ki wafa ka mere lab pe kabhi nam tak na pahunche

wo sanam biger ke mujhse mera kiya bigar lega

kabhi raz khol dun to salam tak napahunche
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Berukhee
ye lafz men cRony/eNemy se le raha hun

Teri berukhee pe zalim mera jee ye chahta hai

ki wafa ka mere lab pe kabhi nam tak na pahunche

wo sanam biger ke mujhse mera kiya bigar lega


kabhi raz khol dun to salam tak napahunche
Berukhi.

tumhari berukhi ne laaj rakh li waada-faan-e ki
tum aaNkhoN se pila dete to paimane kahaaN jaate
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Old 02-04-2008, 10:52 AM
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Berukhi.

tumhari berukhi ne laaj rakh li waada-faan-e ki
tum aaNkhoN se pila dete to paimane kahaaN jaate
Kahaan

Yeh Laog Tazkaray Kartay Hain Apnay Logon Kay
Main Kahan Talash Karoon,Ab Kahan Se Laoon Ussay
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AaNkhoN

Go hath me jumbish nahi aaNkhoN meN to dam hai

Rahne do abhi sagar o meena mere aage

eemaN mujhe roke hai to kheeche hai mejhe kufr

Kaba mere peeche hai to kaleesa mere aage
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