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Muqabla Baitbazi.....april 2008

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Old 04-01-2008, 04:00 AM
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Assalam o Alaikum

Aaj se Maah April ka muqabla bait bazi shuroo ho raha hai.Aap sab se

darkhast hai ke is muqable ke rules ko ghor se parhein aur in rules

ke mutabiq ashar likhein.rules ki pabandi na karne par aap ke sher

ko muqabl se kharij kar diya jaega.



RULES

1) Har member ne aik baar main sirf AIK hi sher likhna hai jis main

pichhle sher se liya gaya lafz hoga.

2)aap pichhle sher se koi bhi lafz muntakhib kar sakte hain jise aap

apne sher main likhenge.

3)ap ke sher main aik lafz lazmi tor par pichhle sher se liya jaega.

4)jis sher main koi bhi lafz pichhle sher se nahin liya gaya ho us

sher ko kharij kar diya jaega.

5)agar koi sher rules ke khilaf likha gaya ho to usse pahle wale

sher se lafz muntakhib karein.

6)yeh aik muqabla hai isliye aap sirf sher hi likhenge aur kisi qism ki

baatcheet nahin hogi.
7)aap jo bhi lafz muntakhib karein us-e sher likhne se pahle ooper likh dein.
Ummid hai aap sab rules ke mutabiq sher likhenge.

7)Is muqable ki aakhri tarikh 30 April hai.

BEST OF LUCK
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mana ke tere sath baharein chali gai-n

ae kash phir a aei-n kabhi din bahar ke
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mana ke tere sath baharein chali gai-n

ae kash phir a aei-n kabhi din bahar ke

Koi es tarah say meray sath adawat tu karta
Qaid kar leta mujhay aur hakumat tu karta
Meinay yeh kab kaha tha k woh sab ko chor day
Woh apnay andaz say karta par mohabbat tu karta
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AASHIQI SABR TALAB AUR TAMANNA BETAB
DIL KA KYA RANG KARON KHONE JIGAR HONE TAK
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tamanna

shauq-e-izhaar-e-tamannaa dar-kinaar
ab tau ehsaas-e- tamannaa bhii nahii
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tamanna

shauq-e-izhaar-e-tamannaa dar-kinaar
ab tau ehsaas-e- tamannaa bhii nahii
EHSAAS
Sheher_e_ehsaas me patthara'o,,bohat hein suman..

Dil k sheeshe ko jharonkon me,,sajaya na kro..
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Is shaher e kharabee main gham e ishq kay maray
Zinda hain yehi baat bari baat hai piyaray

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Kab Yah Kehti Hoon Meri Zaat Ko Koee Gham Laga Hai
Kabhi Tanhaee Main Rote Hoon Tu Yah Or Baat Hai
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