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Muqabla bait bazi November2007

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Old 11-16-2007, 09:42 AM
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hain

hai ajab faisley ka sahra bhee
chalna padiye to paaon jaltey hain

lijiye issi ghazal ka doosra sher
paaon

Asad khushi se mery haath paaoN phool ga'ay,
kaha jo us ne zara mery paaoN daab to dy...

(Asad-ullah Khan Ghalib)
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Old 11-16-2007, 10:30 AM
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paaon

Asad khushi se mery haath paaoN phool ga'ay,
kaha jo us ne zara mery paaoN daab to dy...

(Asad-ullah Khan Ghalib)
haath

haath chootey bhee to rishtey nahi choota kartey
waqt ki shaakh se lamhein nahi toota kartey
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paaon

Asad khushi se mery haath paaoN phool ga'ay,
kaha jo us ne zara mery paaoN daab to dy...

(Asad-ullah Khan Ghalib)
haath

Aankh pe haath dhaaray phirtay thay mager shehar k logon ne
Un ki baatein chhair ker hum ko lehjay se pechan liya

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haath

Aankh pe haath dhaaray phirtay thay mager shehar k logon ne
Un ki baatein chhair ker hum ko lehjay se pechan liya
shehar

jab'kay sehraoN pe mushkil waqt tha,
shehr meiN shoreeda-sar beThy rahy...

us k jaty hi safar bhi ruk gya,
aisy beThy, umr bher beThy rahy....
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jab'kay sehraoN pe mushkil waqt tha,
shehr meiN shoreeda-sar beThy rahy...

us k jaty hi safar bhi ruk gya,
aisy beThy, umr bher beThy rahy....
umr
Juda hua tou thakan umr bhar ki saunp gaya
kata tha raasta jis shakhs ki sharakat se
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kata tha raasta jis shakhs ki sharakat se
jUda

Ab Mera Safar tAnhA Ab Us Kii jUda Manzil
POocho Na Pata Us Ka tUm Meray Thikanay Say
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Ab Mera Safar tAnhA Ab Us Kii jUda Manzil
POocho Na Pata Us Ka tUm Meray Thikanay Say

U ne TUM use keya hai.......

Ab

Ab tuo ye zindagi ka goshwara hai
tujhe nikal ke bage sab Qasara hai !....
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U ne TUM use keya hai.......

Ab

Ab tuo ye zindagi ka goshwara hai
tujhe nikal ke bage sab Qasara hai !....

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zindagi se badi saza hi nahi
aur kyaa jurm hai pata hi nahi
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zindagi se badi saza hi nahi
aur kyaa jurm hai pata hi nahi
pata

ab k phir tera pata pooch k ro'ay gi bahaar,
miN ne socha hy k phir naam na luN ga maiN bhi...
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zindagi

zindagi se badi saza hi nahi
aur kyaa jurm hai pata hi nahi

saza

Zindagi ko na bana lein woh saza mere baad
Hauslaa dena unhen mere Khuda mere baad


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