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Muqabla bait bazi November2007

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Old 11-16-2007, 08:47 AM
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kash
kash aisa ho k ab k bay wafai main karoN
tu phiray qarya ba qarya ko-ba-ko meray liye
main to la-mehdood ho jaon samndr ki trah
tu phiray darya ba darya jo-ba-jo meray liye

darya

Aao hum rait pay bikhray huye moti chun lain
phir ye dariya ki sakhawaat rahay na rahay
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darya

Aao hum rait pay bikhray huye moti chun lain
phir ye dariya ki sakhawaat rahay na rahay

dariya

dariya hoon main bhed bhaav ko kya janoon
mere liye to donon kinaarey eik se hain
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Old 11-16-2007, 09:02 AM
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dariya

dariya hoon main bhed bhaav ko kya janoon
mere liye to donon kinaarey eik se hain
Kinara

na pooch aaj shab-e-hijar kis qadar hai udaas
kahin kahin koi sitaara hai aur kuch bhi nahi
rawaan dawaan hain safeenay talaash mein jis ki
woh ik shikasta kinara hai aur kuch bhi nahin
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Kinara

na pooch aaj shab-e-hijar kis qadar hai udaas
kahin kahin koi sitaara hai aur kuch bhi nahi
rawaan dawaan hain safeenay talaash mein jis ki
woh ik shikasta kinara hai aur kuch bhi nahin
na pooch

Tu Mera naam na poocha kar,
main teri zaat ka hissa hoon,
main teri sooch ma.in shamil hoon,
main teri neend ka qissa hoon,
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Kinara

na pooch aaj shab-e-hijar kis qadar hai udaas
kahin kahin koi sitaara hai aur kuch bhi nahi
rawaan dawaan hain safeenay talaash mein jis ki
woh ik shikasta kinara hai aur kuch bhi nahin
shab

kab se huN kya btaoN jahan-e-kharab meiN,
shab-haa'ay hijr ko bhi rakhuN ger hisaab meiN....


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kab se huN kya btaoN jahan-e-kharab meiN,
shab-haa'ay hijr ko bhi rakhuN ger hisaab meiN....


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shab


nala-e-aakhir-e-shub kis ko sunain nasir
neend pyari hay meray daish kay funkaron ko
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kab se huN kya btaoN jahan-e-kharab meiN,
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shab

yeh eik shab ki mulaqaat bhee ghaneemat hai
kissey hai kal ki khabar thodi door saath chalo
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yeh eik shab ki mulaqaat bhee ghaneemat hai
kissey hai kal ki khabar thodi door saath chalo
door

hy usy door ka safar derpaish,
ham sambhaly nahiN sambhalty haiN...

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