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Muqabla bait bazi November2007

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Old 11-16-2007, 07:00 AM
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main iss umeed pe dooba ke tu bacha lega
ab iske baad mera imtehaan kya lega
as-salam-o-alaikum Faisal bhai, kesy mizaj haiN???


umeed

umeed-e-deed-e-dost ki duniya basa k ham,
baiThy mehr-o-maah ki sham'aiN bujha k ham,
palkoN se jin ko jalty zamanoN ne chun liya,
wo phool us rawish pe tery naqsh-e-paa k ham...


(Mujeed Amjad)
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as-salam-o-alaikum Faisal bhai, kesy mizaj haiN???


umeed

umeed-e-deed-e-dost ki duniya basa k ham,
baiThy mehr-o-maah ki sham'aiN bujha k ham,
palkoN se jin ko jalty zamanoN ne chun liya,
wo phool us rawish pe tery naqsh-e-paa k ham...

(Mujeed Amjad)

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phool khiltay ahin tou hum sochtay hain
tere aanay k zamanay aaye
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phool khiltay ahin tou hum sochtay hain
tere aanay k zamanay aaye
As-salam-o-alaikum Shabnam Sahiba, kesy mizaaj haiN?

tere aanay

tery aany ka dhoka sa raha hy,
diya sa raat bher jalta raha hy...
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phool khiltay ahin tou hum sochtay hain
tere aanay k zamanay aaye

phool

dard ke phool bhee khiltey hain bikhar jaatey hain
zakhm kaise bhee hon, kuch roz mein bhar jaatey hain
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dard ke phool bhee khiltey hain bikhar jaatey hain
zakhm kaise bhee hon, kuch roz mein bhar jaatey hain
jaatey

jaty jaty
wo mujhy achi nishani de gya,
umr bher dohraoN ga, esi kahani de gya
khair maiN pyasa raha, pr us ne itna to kiya,
meri palkoN ki qataaroN ko wo paaani de gya...


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Old 11-16-2007, 08:07 AM
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jaatey

jaty jaty wo mujhy achi nishani de gya,
umr bher dohraoN ga, esi kahani de gya
khair maiN pyasa raha, pr us ne itna to kiya,
meri palkoN ki qataaroN ko wo paaani de gya...


pyaasa

badh gaya thaa pyaas ka ehsaas dariya dekh kar
hum palat aaye magar paani ko pyaasa dekh kar

(meraaj faizabaadi)
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ik khandr aur bana letay hain aasar k pass
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