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Muqabla bait bazi November2007

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Old 11-06-2007, 12:30 PM
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zindagi

zindagi bhi to pasheman-n hai yaha-n la ke mujhe

dhoondti hai koi hela mere mar jane ka
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zindagi

zindagi bhi to pasheman-n hai yaha-n la ke mujhe

dhoondti hai koi hela mere mar jane ka

zindagi

kabhi dhoop de kabhi badliyan dil o jaan se dono qabool hain
magar us mahal mein na qaid kar jahan zindagi ki hawa na ho

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dhoop

yeh dhoop zindgani ki mana shadeed hai

tu woh shajar hai saey ki jis se ummid hai
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dhoop

yeh dhoop zindgani ki mana shadeed hai

tu woh shajar hai saey ki jis se ummid hai
shajar

be shajar shehar mein ghar uska kahan tak dhoondhain
woh jo kahta tha k aangan mein sanober hoga

my favt. shair
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ghar

apne ghar ki aap ronaq garya -o-zari ke waqt

apne ghar ka aap sannata hun chillane ke baad


this one is my fav.
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ghar

apne ghar ki aap ronaq garya -o-zari ke waqt

apne ghar ka aap sannata hun chillane ke baad


this one is my fav.
khoobsurat choice

ghar

har baar palat tay hue ghar ko yahi socha
aye kash kisi lambay safar pe gaye hotay

( Shaharyar )
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khoobsurat choice

ghar

har baar palat tay hue ghar ko yahi socha
aye kash kisi lambay safar pe gaye hotay

( Shaharyar )

lambay safar

kisne socha thaa ke iss lambey safar ke baad phir
mere hissey mein koi taaza safar aa jayega
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Old 11-06-2007, 01:11 PM
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safar

dar-o deewar pe hasrat se nazar karte hain

khush raho ahle watan hum to safarkarte hain
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