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#**231** 12-16-2003, 06:21 PM

na janay kon saa asaib dil may busta hay
keh jo bhi thehra, woh akhir makaan chhod gaya

#**232** 12-16-2003, 06:45 PM

ab Khaak uR rahy hay gulabooN kay sheher meiN
woh loo chaly hay ab, kah pathar jhulus gaye

#**233** 12-16-2003, 07:18 PM

yeh...

yon hi bey-sabas na phira karoo koi shaam gher bhi raha karoo
woo ghazal ki sachi kitaab hai ussey chupkay chupkay perhaa karoo

#**234** 12-16-2003, 08:00 PM

Woh aik chehra jo ankhon main aa basa tha kabhi
Tamaam umar meray ansoowon main qaid raha

#**235** 12-17-2003, 12:14 AM

mere chehare se Gam aashakaaraa nahii.n
ye na samajho ke mai.n Gam kaa maaraa nahii.n

Duubane ko to Duube magar naaz hai
ahl-e-saahil ko ham ne pukaaraa nahii.n

#**236** 12-17-2003, 12:20 AM

mere chehare se Gam aashakaaraa nahii.n
ye na samajho ke mai.n Gam kaa maaraa nahii.n

Duubane ko to Duube magar naaz hai
ahl-e-saahil ko ham ne pukaaraa nahii.n

#**237** 12-17-2003, 06:50 AM

in say zaroor milna saleeqay k loag hein
sar bhi qalam karein gay baray ihtram say

#**238** 12-17-2003, 07:34 AM

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QUOTE (Mirza @ Dec 16 2003, 02:18 PM)
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yeh kia ke har kisi say biyan dil ki halteiin kernein
Faraz tujh ko na aein muhabattein kernein

ye kya har ik se bayan dil ki haalaten karni
Faraz tum ko na aayi muhabbaten karni

aur ab baitbazi

yaad se teri dil e dard aashna maa'moor hai

jaise Ka'abe mein dua'on se fiza maa'moor hai

/aoa

shair kuchh aesey hai

ye kya ke sab se bayaan dil kii haalatein karni
'Faraz' tujh ko na aaein muhabbatein karni

aur agla "yeh" yeh raha

yoon to woh meri rag-e-jaan say bhi thay nazdeek tar
aansuon ki dhund mein lekin na pehchaney gaye

Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]
bohat shukria Danmurfi aap ka, i m grateful

#**239** 12-17-2003, 07:51 AM

yeh baitbazi hai janab last shair ke last lafz se shair post karen plz

#**240** 12-17-2003, 09:10 AM

/aoa

Quote:

QUOTE (danmurfi @ Dec 16 2003, 07:05 PM)
QUOTE
QUOTE (Mirza @ Dec 16 2003, 02:18 PM)
[font=Optima][size=14][color=purple]
yeh kia ke har kisi say biyan dil ki halteiin kernein
Faraz tujh ko na aein muhabattein kernein

ye kya har ik se bayan dil ki haalaten karni
Faraz tum ko na aayi muhabbaten karni

aur ab baitbazi

yaad se teri dil e dard aashna maa'moor hai

jaise Ka'abe mein dua'on se fiza maa'moor hai

shair kuchh aesey hai

ye kya ke sab se bayaan dil kii haalatein karni
'Faraz' tujh ko na aaein muhabbatein karni

aur agla "yeh" yeh raha

yoon to woh meri rag-e-jaan say bhi thay nazdeek tar
aansuon ki dhund mein lekin na pehchaney gaye

Allah hafiz

bohat shukria Danmurfi aap ka, i m grateful

--------------------

/aoa

ur welcome Mirza jee....

Quote:

in say zaroor milna saleeqay k loag hein
sar bhi qalam karein gay baray ihtram say

bohut achchey jee........

Quote:

yeh baitbazi hai janab last shair ke last lafz se shair post karen plz

ye lein janab "yeh" sey

yehi bohut hai ke qaaim rahey wafa ka bharam
koi kisi ka huwa bhi hai umr bhar ke liye

Allah hafiz

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