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Bait-bazi Contest - June 08

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As-salam-o-alaikum Dosto!

aaj se muqabla bait-bazi (June 08) ka aaghaz kiya jata hy, pichly muqabloN ko dekhty hu'ay ham umeed krty haiN k is baar bhi aap apny sheri zoaq ka bherpur izhar kreN gy aur khoob sheir suna'aiN gy...

to jnab muqably ka tareeqa-kar to ap janty hi haiN, k last sheir meiN se koi bhi word sellect krna hy aur aik aisa sher likh dena hy jis meiN wo word aata ho.

muqably k rules simple se hi haiN, mager ap ko strictly follow krna hoN gy...

1- aik member aik baar meiN aik hi post kry ga. aik se za'id posts ki surat meiN pehli post k elawa baqi posts delete kr di ja'aiN gi.

2- koi bhi member apni post ko "edit" nahiN kry ga. edit ki gai post ko (khawh wo kisi waja se edit ki gai ho) delete kr diya ja'ay ga.


yahaN aik baat ki wazahat krta chaluN k chuNky is muqably meiN at a time bohat sy members participate kr rahy hoty haiN, aur akser slow internet speed waly members jitni der meiN aik post krty haiN, us doran fast speed waly kaei members post kr dety haiN... so is terha ki situation ko ignore krty hu'ay slow speed waly members ki wo posts bhi counting meiN shamil ki ja'aiN gi.

muqably ki aakhri tareekh 30 June 2008 hy.
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start bhi maiN hi kr deta huN,

jahan-e-rang-o-bu acha laga hy
phir is k baad tu acha laga hy


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start bhi maiN hi kr deta huN,

jahan-e-rang-o-bu acha laga hy
phir is k baad tu acha laga hy


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PHIR

Phir wafaain bhi karo gay tou poochay ga koi
Sub tumharay yeh sitam hain meray mar janay tak
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PHIR

Phir wafaain bhi karo gay tou poochay ga koi
Sub tumharay yeh sitam hain meray mar janay tak

tak

partaw-e-khur se hy shabnam ko fana ki taleem,
maiN bhi huN aik enayat ki nazer hony tak...

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tak

partaw-e-khur se hy shabnam ko fana ki taleem,
maiN bhi huN aik enayat ki nazer hony tak...

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Nazar
Ab kisi aankh ka jadu nahin chalta mujh per
Woh nazar bhool gai hai mujhay pathar kar kay
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Nazar
Ab kisi aankh ka jadu nahin chalta mujh per
Woh nazar bhool gai hai mujhay pathar kar kay

pathar

koi chehra hua roshan, na ujagar aankheN,
aaeina dekh rahi thiN meri paTher aankheN....

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pathar

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aaeina dekh rahi thiN meri paTher aankheN....

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AAnkhain

Iss tarha sooi hain aankhain jaagtay sapnoon kay saath
Khwahishain liptein hoon jaisay band darwazay kay saath
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AAnkhain

Iss tarha sooi hain aankhain jaagtay sapnoon kay saath
Khwahishain liptein hoon jaisay band darwazay kay saath

Iss tarha

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log malum kreN, ham khaRy so'ay ja'aiN....

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