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Ashaar starting with character "Bay"

This is a discussion on Ashaar starting with character "Bay" within the Bait Bazi forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Originally Posted by balloo [b]maiN bhii ma'azrat ke saath ye kahne ke liye haazir huaa hooN ki...mujhe nahiiN lagta hai ...


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Old 06-07-2008, 07:22 PM
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[b]maiN bhii ma'azrat ke saath ye kahne ke liye haazir huaa hooN ki...mujhe nahiiN lagta hai ki ko_ii bhii shaa'ir aapne kalaam meN apnii zaatii kaifiyat ka istemaal nahiiN kartaa...balki maiN to yahii kahooNga ki har shaa'ir ke ashaar meN uske zaatii khayaalaat hii maujood hote haiN....yahaaN mujhe ''JaaN Nisaar AKhtar'' sahab ka ek she'r yaad aa rahaa hai mulaahizaa farmaayeiN..

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ab is she'r ko aap kis meyaar meN rakheiNge....ek she'r ''Iqbaal'' sahab ka bhii dekhte jaaiye..

duniya ko hai phir marka-e-rooh-o-badan pesh
tehzeeb ney phir apney darindoN ko ubhaara


waqt kii kamii mahsoos ho rahii hai...baaqi baateN baad meN....fil_haal shab-b_khair

Bohut khoob janaab.............. I'm stunned. YahaN Aap ko yeah bataney ki koshish ker rahey hain ke plz,watch your itikhaab first then send it here aur Aap ne na kehtey kehtey bhi oss se bhi ounchi cheez saamney rukh dee. Balloo jee,aise to her kisi ki bohut si secrets hoti haiN, and I'm sure ke Aapki bhi hongi,to kia Aap ossey issi terha bursar-e-Aam, tush-heer karengey? I guess not.

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Old 06-08-2008, 01:43 PM
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wa.....H kyaa meyaari she'r pesh kiyaa hai aapne....kamaal hai janaab yahaaN ''Faraz'' sahab ka ek khoob_soorat she'r meyaar se giraa huaa nazar aata hai...aour is nihaayat ghaTiya she'r par ko_ii zubaan nahiiN khultii.....aur aapke aalaa ilm ke qurbaan jaa'ooN ki mere khayaal se yahaaN harf ''bay'' se shuroo hone vaale ashaar pesh karne they jabki aapne to qariib-qariib sabhii harfoN se ashaar pesh kar diye haiN....aur ko_ii ''mod'' samjhaane vaala nahiiN hai.....bahar_kaif ab aap se maziid guftagoo maiN gair-zaroori ssamajhtaa hooN...

haaN iss hawaale se yahaaN ke ko_ii ''mod'' ya ''adm.'' baat karnaa chaaheN to maiN haazir ho jaa'ooNga....tab tak ke liye Khuda_haafiz.
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maiN bhii ma'azrat ke saath ye kahne ke liye haazir huaa hooN ki...mujhe nahiiN lagta hai ki ko_ii bhii shaa'ir aapne kalaam meN apnii zaatii kaifiyat ka istemaal nahiiN kartaa...balki maiN to yahii kahooNga ki har shaa'ir ke ashaar meN uske zaatii khayaalaat hii maujood hote haiN....yahaaN mujhe ''JaaN Nisaar AKhtar'' sahab ka ek she'r yaad aa rahaa hai mulaahizaa farmaayeiN..

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ab is she'r ko aap kis meyaar meN rakheiNge....ek she'r ''Iqbaal'' sahab ka bhii dekhte jaaiye..

duniya ko hai phir marka-e-rooh-o-badan pesh
tehzeeb ney phir apney darindoN ko ubhaara


waqt kii kamii mahsoos ho rahii hai...baaqi baateN baad meN....fil_haal shab-b_khair
jnab maiN ne is bat se inkhar nahiN kiya k koi sha'ir apny kalam meiN apni zati keifiaat ka istamal nahiN krta... balkay maiN keh raha huN k ustaad shoa'ra ne bhi kai jaga esi zaati kayfiaat ko bayaN kiya hy k un sheroN ko is terha ki mehfil meiN sunany se guraiz krna chahiay...

us sheir main go k koi baRi qaabil-e-aetaraaz bat naheen hai, lekin alfaaz aesey hain ke jo kissi ko bhi ghalat mafhoom leney main madad de saktey haiN issi liye main ne us sheir ki tardeed ki...

hamaara maqsad is mehfil k mahol ko saaf rakhna hai... because ham sab janty haiN k ye aik family forum hy aur yahaN her age group k log aaty...
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wa.....H kyaa meyaari she'r pesh kiyaa hai aapne....kamaal hai janaab yahaaN ''Faraz'' sahab ka ek khoob_soorat she'r meyaar se giraa huaa nazar aata hai...aour is nihaayat ghaTiya she'r par ko_ii zubaan nahiiN khultii.....aur aapke aalaa ilm ke qurbaan jaa'ooN ki mere khayaal se yahaaN harf ''bay'' se shuroo hone vaale ashaar pesh karne they jabki aapne to qariib-qariib sabhii harfoN se ashaar pesh kar diye haiN....aur ko_ii ''mod'' samjhaane vaala nahiiN hai.....bahar_kaif ab aap se maziid guftagoo maiN gair-zaroori ssamajhtaa hooN...

haaN iss hawaale se yahaaN ke ko_ii ''mod'' ya ''adm.'' baat karnaa chaaheN to maiN haazir ho jaa'ooNga....tab tak ke liye Khuda_haafiz.

Balloo jee,
Aap ko ager mera yeah shair kuch qaabil-e-aitraaz laga hai to mai ma'azrut khowah huu.You know what,Actually, Aap ziyada hurt iss liyeye hain ke mai ne aap ki baat per agree nahii kia. Anyway. that's OK,I have no problem.
Jaha tuk lufz BAY se shroo honey waley asha'ar ki baat hai to janab mai ne to yeah hi impression liya hai ke lufz BAY, shair mai mojood ho, shroo honey ki shurt nahi hai
tell me plz if I'm wrong ager aisa nahi hai to mai deffinitely ahtiyat rukhoongi.




AasmaaN ki fikr kia AasmaaN khufa sahii

Aap ye bata'eyye...... Aap to khufa nahii

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Bay aawaaz gali koochoon main ghazal sara hai
Sher-e- sukhan kaa aik musaafir tanhaa tanhaa
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Bud naseebi ka mai qa'yel to nahii huu'......... lekin

Mai ne bursaat mai jultey howey ghur dekhey haiN
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BichRrey abhi to hum bus, kul purso

Jeo'ngi kaisey mai iss haal mai burso
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Baat kuch samujh na Aa'ii, kumi kia hum mai pa'ii

Aek turfa yeah mohabbut, hum hi ne sirf nibha'ii
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