Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-EVERGREEN LADY+Jul 12 2003, 06:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (EVERGREEN LADY @ Jul 12 2003, 06:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> un ki aankhoun ney ibteda ki thi
meri deewangi jawabi hai
mai gusaree agar nahin jayiz
aap ki aankh kiun sharabi hai [/b][/quote]
hmm /weldone

<!--QuoteBegin-ajnabi_dost+Jul 12 2003, 06:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (ajnabi_dost @ Jul 12 2003, 06:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-mahee+Jul 12 2003, 11:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (mahee @ Jul 12 2003, 11:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
hmmmm to is baar Ankhein hai topic abhi to koe nazam yaad nahi aa rahi aankhoin pay ;) han sheir likh deta hoin 1


wo keh rahi thi samandar nahi hai AANKHEIN hain
mein un mein doob gya aetabaar kertey hoa

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bpht galat baat hai yeh /angry /angry
meri pasand ka shermujhe psot nahi karney diya pehley hikerdiya kheir mr .kuch nahee hota
ek aur sher ankhoo per



AMJAD woh ankhein jheel si kehri tu hain magar............... ....
un mein koi bhi uks merey naam ka nahi....

woh keh raha tha samandar nahi hain ankhein hain.......
mein doop gayi un mein idbar kartey hue.....
i luv thzsher vvvvvv much....
wht abt u all??? [/b][/quote]
hmm well in ahsaar ki roman khaas taor per pehle wale ki kuch samjh nahi aayi .. mager dosra shear.. waqayi buhat khusburet hai .... nice choice jee

<!--QuoteBegin-Adeel+Jul 12 2003, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Adeel @ Jul 12 2003, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box88/i885631677263.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box77/i773431678430.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> [/b][/quote]
hmm adeel ... buhat hi khubsuret ... waisey yeh meri fav ghazal bhi hai .. meri diary mein bhi rehti hai yeh :p ... /cig ... thnx for sharing

<!--QuoteBegin-dove+Jul 12 2003, 08:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (dove @ Jul 12 2003, 08:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> itnaa achaa topic itnay ghalat time pay shuroo kia .... s s s ..... khair mein koshish karon gee post karnay kee is mein .....


woh aankh chupkay say youn dil kay bhaid keh jaa'ay
keh jesay baat koi yaad aa kay reh jaa'ay
na mein haseen na woh khoobroo magar
ik saath hamein jo daikh lay woh daikhtaa reh ja'ay [/quote]
yaariya ... yeh kya baat howi .. TUM KAHAAN BUSY HO /angry /angry ... pata hai i m missing u in sos ,.. ya shayid tum hoti ho mujeh nazur nahi aatein ...

mager shear tao buhat hi khubsuret hai well teri choice tao hai hi na ... dish daashing /hugs /hugs

<!--QuoteBegin-kiran+Jul 12 2003, 09:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kiran @ Jul 12 2003, 09:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> VERY GOOD BIYA
BUHUT ACHCHA TOPIC HAI
OR BARISH KA TOPIC ITNI JALDEE KIUN KHALLAS KIA

OK MERE TARF SE AIK SHEER




MERE AANKHON KE JADO SE
SHYED TUM NAWAQIF HO
JIS PE MUJH KO PYAR AAJAY
US KO PAGEL KARDETA HON
CHOR KE MUJH KO JANE WALA
LOUT KE WAPES AAIGA
DAAEN BAAEN AAG LAGA KE
AAGE JUNGEL KARDETA HON [/b][/quote]
yaariya ... aik hufte se shayid zyada hogaya tha that is y TUM kerwadiya osey ... mager naya shoroh hogaya hai na aate raheyga aur share kerte raha keejaey


good one /weldone

<!--QuoteBegin-Kashmiri+Jul 13 2003, 03:00 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Kashmiri @ Jul 13 2003, 03:00 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> "Yeh Teri Bhi Aankhon Ka Qusur Hai
Main Tanha Gunahgar To Nahi" ;D [/b][/quote]
wah .... dil pe laga hai jaa ker yeh shear buhat khoob KASHMIRI

<!--QuoteBegin-Cute_gal+Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Cute_gal @ Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ye bhi mumkin hai rahon ankk mein ansoo ki tarha
yeh bhi mumkin hai kabhi yaad na aaon us ko [/b][/quote]
well .. aap pa ju pehla shear hai wuh bhi mera fav hai infact washi shah ki wuh puri ghazal hi meri all time fav rahi hai .. aur dosra shear bhi buhat aala buhat khubsuret .. ashaar ki yehi khaas baat hai k do linoon mein bas tabahi hi hai tabahi

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Kabhi kabhi tou chhalak parti hain yoonhi be-sabab aankhein
Udaas honey ka koi sabab nahin hota
Mein Waledain ko yeh baat kaisey samjhaaoon
Mohabbaton mein " Hasab Nasab " nahin hota

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Neendain meri Aankhon se churaata hai wohi shakhs
So jaaoon tou khawaabon mein bhi aata hai wohi shakhs
Hur zakhm ka khaaliq bhi koi aur nahin hai.............
hur zakhm pe marhum bhi lagaata hai wohi shakhs

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Doobna hi tha jo Kashti ka Muqaddar, Ya Rub
Aankh ke saamney, Aey Kaash, Na Saahil hota

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<!--QuoteBegin-Adeel+Jul 12 2003, 06:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Adeel @ Jul 12 2003, 06:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box88/i885631677263.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box77/i773431678430.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> [/b][/quote]
Great ;D /weldone

<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 13 2003, 05:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 13 2003, 05:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 12 2003, 01:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 12 2003, 01:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Dekhi hai Uski Aankhon Main Pehli Dafa Nammi&nbsp; /sad
Yun Lag Raha hai Jaisey .................... ..............&nbsp; s


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Mohabbat Kya Hai ??


Aao Kay Batayein Hum Tum Ko
Kya Cheez Mohabbat Hoti Hai
Insaan Kay Dil Per Insaan Ki
Pakeeza Hakumat Hoti Hai
Kuch Husn Main Jiddat Hoti Hai
Kuch Ishq Main Chahat Hoti Hai
Kuch Aankhein Ishara Kerti Hain
Bus Yoonhi Mohabbat Hoti Hai

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Nasha Barta Hai Imtehan Main Kia
Jaan Baqi Hai Ab Jaan Main Kia

Ghortay Ho Jo Yun Tasalsul Say
Chiad Dalo Gay Saiban Main Kia

Bey Dehani Main Sir Chupatay Ho
Khar ugtay Hain Meray Dehan Main Kia

Ankh Hati Nahi Sitaron Say
Koi Jado Hai Asman Main Kia

Dasht Main Bhi Wohi Udasi Hai
Hum Karin Gay Kisi Makan Main Kia

Doaur Partay Ho Uss Kay Dokhkay Main
Koi Mehmez Hai Ghuman Main Kia


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KUCCH TO APNEE NISHAANEEYAN RAAKH JAA
IN KITAABON MEIN TITLIYAAN RAKKH JAA

LOG TANHA NA LAUT JAAYEIN KAHEEN
TU RAASTON MEIN KAHAANIYAN RAKKH JAA

HO RAHA HAI AGAR JUDA MUJHSE
MERI AANKHON PE UNGLIYAAN RAKKH JAA

AAJ TOOFAN BHI AKELAA HAI
TU KINAARON PE KASHTIYAAN RAKKH JAA

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Muhabbut Jub kay Sachay Dil Main Pulri Ho

mujhay izhaar kurna

Lufz main Acha nahi lugta

Jo kehna Ho

woh ankhain keh daiti hain

yeh lufzoon ka sahara

mujhay acha nahi lugta

tumhain kehna hay jo

woh kiyoun nahi kehtay

tumhain hur baat ka kehna

mujhay acha nahi lugta [/b][/quote]
yun lag raha hai jaisey samunder udaas hai ...


haan chuchu ne shear mukamul kerdiya hai .. waisey achi choice hai aap ki SY .. hmmm

aur ankhoon pe ju namzein aur ghazlein aap ne shear ki hein wuh bhi kafi aala si hein .. mager mujeh personally ju sub se pyari lagi wuh hai .. MOHABBAT KYA HAI ... thnx for sharing though aur share kerte rahein jub tuk yeh topic jaari hai :p [/b][/quote]
/mad s Sub ko Meri Choice Pasand Aati hai ;D