Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-Adeel+Jul 12 2003, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Adeel @ Jul 12 2003, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://www.eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box88/i885631677263.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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so nice adeel bhai ........ /good /flower

tumhara naam likhne ki izazat chin gaye jab se
koi bhi lafz likhta hoon ankhein bheeg jaati hein....

ye bhi mumkin hai rahon ankk mein ansoo ki tarha
yeh bhi mumkin hai kabhi yaad na aaon us ko

<!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 12 2003, 01:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 12 2003, 01:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Dekhi hai Uski Aankhon Main Pehli Dafa Nammi /sad
Yun Lag Raha hai Jaisey .................... .............. s


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Mohabbat Kya Hai ??


Aao Kay Batayein Hum Tum Ko
Kya Cheez Mohabbat Hoti Hai
Insaan Kay Dil Per Insaan Ki
Pakeeza Hakumat Hoti Hai
Kuch Husn Main Jiddat Hoti Hai
Kuch Ishq Main Chahat Hoti Hai
Kuch Aankhein Ishara Kerti Hain
Bus Yoonhi Mohabbat Hoti Hai

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Nasha Barta Hai Imtehan Main Kia
Jaan Baqi Hai Ab Jaan Main Kia

Ghortay Ho Jo Yun Tasalsul Say
Chiad Dalo Gay Saiban Main Kia

Bey Dehani Main Sir Chupatay Ho
Khar ugtay Hain Meray Dehan Main Kia

Ankh Hati Nahi Sitaron Say
Koi Jado Hai Asman Main Kia

Dasht Main Bhi Wohi Udasi Hai
Hum Karin Gay Kisi Makan Main Kia

Doaur Partay Ho Uss Kay Dokhkay Main
Koi Mehmez Hai Ghuman Main Kia


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KUCCH TO APNEE NISHAANEEYAN RAAKH JAA
IN KITAABON MEIN TITLIYAAN RAKKH JAA

LOG TANHA NA LAUT JAAYEIN KAHEEN
TU RAASTON MEIN KAHAANIYAN RAKKH JAA

HO RAHA HAI AGAR JUDA MUJHSE
MERI AANKHON PE UNGLIYAAN RAKKH JAA

AAJ TOOFAN BHI AKELAA HAI
TU KINAARON PE KASHTIYAAN RAKKH JAA

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Muhabbut Jub kay Sachay Dil Main Pulri Ho

mujhay izhaar kurna

Lufz main Acha nahi lugta

Jo kehna Ho

woh ankhain keh daiti hain

yeh lufzoon ka sahara

mujhay acha nahi lugta

tumhain kehna hay jo

woh kiyoun nahi kehtay

tumhain hur baat ka kehna

mujhay acha nahi lugta [/b][/quote]
yun lag raha hai jaisey samunder udaas hai ...


haan chuchu ne shear mukamul kerdiya hai .. waisey achi choice hai aap ki SY .. hmmm

aur ankhoon pe ju namzein aur ghazlein aap ne shear ki hein wuh bhi kafi aala si hein .. mager mujeh personally ju sub se pyari lagi wuh hai .. MOHABBAT KYA HAI ... thnx for sharing though aur share kerte rahein jub tuk yeh topic jaari hai :p

<!--QuoteBegin-Dr_Who+Jul 12 2003, 01:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Dr_Who @ Jul 12 2003, 01:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> aa.Nkh se aa.Nkh milaataa hai ko_ii
dil ko khii.Nche liye jaataa hai ko_ii

vaa-e-hairat ke bharii mahafil me.n
mujh ko tanhaa nazar aataa hai ko_ii

chaahiye Khud pe yaqiin-e-kaamil
hausalaa kis kaa ba.Dhaataa hai ko_ii

sab karishmaat-e-tasavvur hai "Shakeel"
varanaa aataa hai na jaataa hai ko_ii [/b][/quote]
whmm khoob... /weldone

<!--QuoteBegin-Dr_Who+Jul 12 2003, 01:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Dr_Who @ Jul 12 2003, 01:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> aa.Nkh se aa.Nkh milaa baat banaataa kyuu.N hai
tu agar mujhase Khafaa hai to chhupaataa kyuu.N hai


Gair lagataa hai na apano.n kii tarah milataa hai
tu zamaane kii tarah mujhako sataataa kyuu.N hai


vaqt ke saath haalaat badal jaate hai.n
ye haqiiqat hai magar mujhako sunaataa kyuu.N hai


ek muddat se jahaa.N kaafile guzare hii nahii.n
aisii raaho.n pe charaaGo.n ko jalaataa kyuu.N hai [/b][/quote]
wah jee buhat hi khooob ... maza aagaya ghazal perh ker...


vaqt ke saath haalaat badal jaate hai.n
ye haqiiqat hai magar mujhako sunaataa kyuu.N hai


ek muddat se jahaa.N kaafile guzare hii nahii.n
aisii raaho.n pe charaaGo.n ko jalaataa kyuu.N hai


buhat hi /weldone

<!--QuoteBegin-Dr_Who+Jul 12 2003, 01:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Dr_Who @ Jul 12 2003, 01:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> aa.Nkho.n me.n jal rahaa hai kyuu.N bujhataa nahii.n dhuua.N
uThataa to hai ghaTaa saa barasataa nahii.n dhuaa.N

chuulhaa nahii.n jalaaye yaa bastii hii jal ga_ii
kuchh roz ho gaye hai.n ab uThataa nahii.n dhuaa.N

aa.Nkho.n se po.nchane se lagaa aa.Nch kaa pataa
yuu.N cheharaa pher lene se chhupata nahii.n dhuaa.N

aa.Nkho.n se aa.Nsuo.n ke maraasim puraane hai.n
mehamaan ye ghar me.n aaye.n to chubhataa nahii.n dhuaa.N [/b][/quote]
YEH ghazal main ne suni howi hi ...jugjeet sahub ki .. welll

is ka hur shear mujeh buhat pasand hai .. welldone ... acha intekhaab hai aap ka keep sharing

<!--QuoteBegin-CuTe ChIcLeT+Jul 12 2003, 05:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (CuTe ChIcLeT @ Jul 12 2003, 05:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
On of my most favourites ... jab poetry parhni shuru ki thi to jo chand nazmen achi lagi thein yeh un mein se ek hai :blush ...


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~ Un Jheel Si Gehri Ankhon Mein ~

Un jheel si gehri ankhon mein ik sham kahin aabad to ho!
Us jheel kinarey pal do pal
Ik khwab ka neela phool khiley!
Woh phool baha dein lehron mein
Ik roz kabhi hum shaam dhaley
Us phool ke behtey rangon mein
Jis waqt larazta chand chaley!
Us waqt kahin un ankhon mein us bisrey pal ki yaad to ho!
Un jheel si gehri ankhon mein ik sham kahin aabad to ho!

Phir chahey umar samandar ki
Her mauj pareshan ho jaye!
Phir chahey ankh dareechey se
Her khwab gurezan ho jaye!
Phir chahey phool ke chehrey ka
Her dard numayan ho jaye!


Us jheel kinarey pal do pal woh roop nagar aijaad to ho!
Din raat ke is aainey mein woh aks kabhi aazad to ho!
Un jheel si gehri ankhon mein ik sham kahin aabad to ho!

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chuchu (mad) TUM ...















waise yeh nazum meri bhi buhat fav hai ...


Un jheel si gehri ankhon mein ik sham kahin aabad to ho! (mad) ... dekho lo jheel si ankhein ) ...

<!--QuoteBegin-EVERGREEN LADY+Jul 12 2003, 05:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (EVERGREEN LADY @ Jul 12 2003, 05:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ishq karney kai bhi kuch aadab hua kartey hain
jagti aankhoun kai bhi kuch khwab hua kartey hain
har koi ro kar dikhaye ye zaroori tou nahin
khushk aankhoun main bhi sailaab hua kartey hain [/b][/quote]
/weldone


Doobna hi tha jo Kashti ka Muqaddar, Ya Rub
Aankh ke saamney, Aey Kaash, Na Saahil hota

<!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 12 2003, 05:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 12 2003, 05:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
Main Na Roya Tu Pukaray Ansoo
Kon Zakmoon Main Utaray Ansoo

Meri Kismat Main Sitaray Ansoo
Bujh Gay ,Ankh Kinaray Ansoo

Abb Main Maehzoor Nahin Hoon Farhat
Ankh Lathi Hai , Saharay Ansoo

Woh Jo Jaal Jatay Rahay Khuwab Meray
Ban Gay Hongay Sharary Ansoo

Jab Talak Ro Na Paron Khul Kar
Kartay Rahtey Hain Isharay Ansoo

Eik Bhi Hum Nay Bacha Rakha Nahin
Dey Deay Apko Saray Ansoo

Ho Gay Pelay Na Janay Kaisay
Surk Kitnay Thay Hamaray Ansoo

Itnay Arzaan Hain Kay Buss Kuch Na Kaho
Yeh Meray Dard Kay Maray Ansoo

Khoon Ho Jana Tha Bhari Farhat
Kuon Waridon Say Guzaray Ansoo

By :- Farhat Abbas Shah [/b][/quote]
hmm herut hai k kabhi main ne yeh ghazal nahi perhi ... aaj perh li .. buhat khubsuret...



meri aankh say giray hain chand katray
wo samajh sakay to aansoo...na samajh sakay to paani !