Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-perfectly_created+Ju l 17 2003, 12:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (perfectly_created @ Jul 17 2003, 12:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Biya jee, another great topic! (y)

Bohat lutf raha ANKHON par poetry paRhnay ka .. ik chota say hissa hamari jaanib say bhi iss bazm meiN qabool karaiN ~

<img src='http://web.urducorner.com:2/images/poetry/poems/46_2.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> [/b][/quote]
hmm thnku ..


aap se kisi master pc ki hi umeed thi mujeh .. wah perh ker aap ki nazum bghi buhat maza aaya .. infact saved bina pocohey mager ub tao kerli /jin ... thnx P_C ... .. acha laga aap ne aaker apni pasnad share ki ..

<!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 17 2003, 01:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 17 2003, 01:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mohabbat se bhari nigaah-e-yaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon..
mein teri aankhon mein pyaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

maanoos raha faqat bezaari-o-besabri se aaj tak..
kabhi haasil dil ko sabr-o-karaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

har pal hai roshan meri aankhon mein tere ishq ka chiraagh..
yeh chingaari tuj mein bhi ek baar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

darmaaN mila nahin mujhe marz-e-mohabbat ka taa-umr..
do roz tujhe bhi is rog se beemaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

kaati hai jaise hayaat bekasi-o-majboori mein maine..
tujhe bhi yun dar-ba-dar aur laachaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

kurbaan hai jaise meri har saans mera har pal tum pe ..
do ghadi tujhe bhi muj pe nisaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

jo bhi mila woh dard-o-ranj de ke gayaa hai..
kisi roz magar koi gham-khwaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

aa ke jo phir na jaaye kabhi teri yaadoN ki tarah..
zindagi mein aisi bahaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon [/b][/quote]
buaht khubsuret SY ...

<!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 17 2003, 11:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 17 2003, 11:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 02:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 02:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
"DIL MEIN MERE AA BEATHO"

Hum shehroon shehroon ghoomey hein
Hum basti basti ho aaey
hum galiyaan gurzey jhaank chukey
hum ik ik mur per rukhte howe
is LERKI tuk tao aa pohunchey

Wuh lerki mun ki ujli thi
gu rung'gut ki wuh kaali thi
is kaali rung'gut wali per
hum tun mun apna haar chukey
hum dil tuk os k ho aaey

is lerki k mun mundir ki
chao'khut khali khali thi
is khali chau'khut k andur
hum suret apni taank aaey
hum moorut apni taank aaey

jub subah ko haath m un dhoote hein
balon mein kunghi kerte hein
is lerki ko maloom howa
chut choor kahein se aaya tha
chao'khut mein moorut taank aaya

pehley tao haeraan ankhoon se
tasweer ko tukney mein
mas'hoor howi ' masroor howi
phir haath burha ker lerki ne
tasweer nikali chao'khut se
tasweer k tuk'rey chaar howe
chut chaor tao akhir choor hi tha
wuh goundh (=glue) kahein se ley aaya
aur raat k ik san'nate mein
is lerki tuk wuh aa pohuncha
aur goundh laga k tukroon ko
phir chao'khut pe chipka aaya

wuh lerki at'thur lerki thi
moorut ki qeemut kya jaaney
surut ki qeemun kya jaaney
tasweer ko os ne nooch lya
aur dala os ko chooley mein
tasweer tao jul k raakh howi
chut choor bhi akhir insaan
aur insaan bhi aur shayid bhi
wuh raakh ikhati ker laya
aur bhura os ko daamun mein
lerki k dur per jaa pohuncha
lerki k dil mein aa pohuncha

serdi ki thundi raaton mein
jub saari duniya sooti hai
wuh lerki bahur bageechay mein
soochon mein doobi beathi thi
tasweer jula ker wuh lerki
kuch heeran thi
kuch nadum thi
phir aik din subah saweeray hi
shayir k dur jaa pohunchi
aur booli apney shayir se
"TASWEER NAHI TAO GHUM NAH KERO
IS CHAO'KHUT PE TUM SAJH JAO
IS DIL MERE AA BEATHO
S ASLI SURUT K HOTE
MAIN NUQLI SURUT NA LOONGI" [/b][/quote]
SImply Awesome Biya jI [/b][/quote]
thnx yaariya

<!--QuoteBegin-innocent_girl19+Jul 18 2003, 12:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (innocent_girl19 @ Jul 18 2003, 12:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> sirf chehray ki udaasi se bhar ayi ankhain,
dil ka alam tu abhi apne dekha hi nahi [/b][/quote]

<!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 18 2003, 06:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 18 2003, 06:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 11:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 11:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mujhay yeh samajh nahi ati hai ke shair-o-shairi main akhir girls hi ziada kiun hoti hain?? ladkay kiun nahin?? /thinking [/b][/quote]
yeh aik nayi post start kereing ... waisey yeh main bhi sooch rahi thi ... ajeeb baat hai na ... mager sahyid lerkiyoon k paas waqt faltoo hota hai ) ... aur lerke jazbaati nahi hote,.. pata nahi jin bhai :-s [/b][/quote]
haina?? waisay biya sis yeh jo ap ne jazbat wali baat ki haina.. i think yehi baat hai.. ladkian bahut sensitive hoti hain.. ise liye yahan ladkion ka rash ziada hai .. per ab main aa gaya hon na. .tu bus /firing /firing ahooooooo [/b][/quote]


Ay tay fir hai kay larkiyan jazbati hoti hain...

aur tum aa gaye ho to ab kia ? /jin /narayna [/b][/quote]
haan ub kya zara khul k batana /jin

<!--QuoteBegin-çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§+Jul 18 2003, 06:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (çØÜñtL£§§ þL£á§Ü®£§ @ Jul 18 2003, 06:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://img.villagephotos.co m/p/2003-7/282359/16_1.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> [/b][/quote]
a good one countless

aik meri tarf se bhi hojaey ...

<img src='http://pakwatan.com/main/urdu/zeb/images/tmp/phpy6ipbZ.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 11:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 11:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-dilruba+Jul 16 2003, 10:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (dilruba @ Jul 16 2003, 10:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> (l)&nbsp; (l)&nbsp; (l)&nbsp; (l)&nbsp; (l)&nbsp; (l) Chehre pai hasi cha jaati hai...
Aankhon main suroor aaa jaata hai
jub tum mujhe apna kehto ho
apne pai ghuroor aa jaata hai........
[/b][/quote]
dilruba .... buhat hi achey hein sara ashaar.. thnx for taking a part .. lplus ... sharing a good stuff wiv us [/b][/quote]
Biya ji its my pleasure....

one more shair...

Meri Aankhon ko bakshey hai aansoo
dil ko daag-e-alam de gai gai
Is inaayat pe qurbaan jaavu
Pyaar maanga tha gham de gay........


(l) (l) (l) (l) (l) (l) (l)

<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 18 2003, 07:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 18 2003, 07:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 17 2003, 01:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 17 2003, 01:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mohabbat se bhari nigaah-e-yaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon..
mein teri aankhon mein pyaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

maanoos raha faqat bezaari-o-besabri se aaj tak..
kabhi haasil dil ko sabr-o-karaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

har pal hai roshan meri aankhon mein tere ishq ka chiraagh..
yeh chingaari tuj mein bhi ek baar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

darmaaN mila nahin mujhe marz-e-mohabbat ka taa-umr..
do roz tujhe bhi is rog se beemaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

kaati hai jaise hayaat bekasi-o-majboori mein maine..
tujhe bhi yun dar-ba-dar aur laachaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

kurbaan hai jaise meri har saans mera har pal tum pe ..
do ghadi tujhe bhi muj pe nisaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

jo bhi mila woh dard-o-ranj de ke gayaa hai..
kisi roz magar koi gham-khwaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon

aa ke jo phir na jaaye kabhi teri yaadoN ki tarah..
zindagi mein aisi bahaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon [/b][/quote]
buaht khubsuret SY ... [/b][/quote]
Aadab Arz hai /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-DIL+Jul 14 2003, 07:51 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (DIL @ Jul 14 2003, 07:51 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Raat kee satha pay ubhray terey chehray kay naqoosh


[/b][/quote]
satha ??
wat does this means
can u tell the correct word plzzzzz

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