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RulesThis is a discussion on ANKHEIN ... within the Bait Bazi forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td> QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ...
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#171
07-17-2003, 07:30 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box79/i798281424867.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> :'( [/b][/quote] meri fav .. 1.gif ")1") bas i just luv thi s ghazal                  |
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#172
07-17-2003, 07:36 AM
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"DIL MEIN MERE AA BEATHO" Hum shehroon shehroon ghoomey hein Hum basti basti ho aaey hum galiyaan gurzey jhaank chukey hum ik ik mur per rukhte howe is LERKI tuk tao aa pohunchey Wuh lerki mun ki ujli thi gu rung'gut ki wuh kaali thi is kaali rung'gut wali per hum tun mun apna haar chukey hum dil tuk os k ho aaey is lerki k mun mundir ki chao'khut khali khali thi is khali chau'khut k andur hum suret apni taank aaey hum moorut apni taank aaey jub subah ko haath m un dhoote hein balon mein kunghi kerte hein is lerki ko maloom howa chut choor kahein se aaya tha chao'khut mein moorut taank aaya pehley tao haeraan ankhoon se tasweer ko tukney mein mas'hoor howi ' masroor howi phir haath burha ker lerki ne tasweer nikali chao'khut se tasweer k tuk'rey chaar howe chut chaor tao akhir choor hi tha wuh goundh (=glue) kahein se ley aaya aur raat k ik san'nate mein is lerki tuk wuh aa pohuncha aur goundh laga k tukroon ko phir chao'khut pe chipka aaya wuh lerki at'thur lerki thi moorut ki qeemut kya jaaney surut ki qeemun kya jaaney tasweer ko os ne nooch lya aur dala os ko chooley mein tasweer tao jul k raakh howi chut choor bhi akhir insaan aur insaan bhi aur shayid bhi wuh raakh ikhati ker laya aur bhura os ko daamun mein lerki k dur per jaa pohuncha lerki k dil mein aa pohuncha serdi ki thundi raaton mein jub saari duniya sooti hai wuh lerki bahur bageechay mein soochon mein doobi beathi thi tasweer jula ker wuh lerki kuch heeran thi kuch nadum thi phir aik din subah saweeray hi shayir k dur jaa pohunchi aur booli apney shayir se "TASWEER NAHI TAO GHUM NAH KERO IS CHAO'KHUT PE TUM SAJH JAO IS DIL MERE AA BEATHO S ASLI SURUT K HOTE MAIN NUQLI SURUT NA LOONGI" |
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#173
07-17-2003, 07:40 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 11:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 11:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mujhay yeh samajh nahi ati hai ke shair-o-shairi main akhir girls hi ziada kiun hoti hain?? ladkay kiun nahin?? /thinking [/b][/quote] yeh aik nayi post start kereing ... waisey yeh main bhi sooch rahi thi ... ajeeb baat hai na ... mager sahyid lerkiyoon k paas waqt faltoo hota hai ) ... aur lerke jazbaati nahi hote,.. pata nahi jin bhai :-s [/b][/quote]haina?? waisay biya sis yeh jo ap ne jazbat wali baat ki haina.. i think yehi baat hai.. ladkian bahut sensitive hoti hain.. ise liye yahan ladkion ka rash ziada hai .. per ab main aa gaya hon na. .tu bus /firing /firing ahooooooo |
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#174
07-17-2003, 07:41 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 11:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 11:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <img src='http://eidmubarak.com/imageboxes/box79/i798281424867.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> :'( [/b][/quote] meri fav .. bas i just luv thi s ghazal [/b][/quote]dekha ap ki choice kaisay jan li? /ura |
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#175
07-17-2003, 07:41 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 17 2003, 11:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 17 2003, 11:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> "DIL MEIN MERE AA BEATHO" Hum shehroon shehroon ghoomey hein Hum basti basti ho aaey hum galiyaan gurzey jhaank chukey hum ik ik mur per rukhte howe is LERKI tuk tao aa pohunchey Wuh lerki mun ki ujli thi gu rung'gut ki wuh kaali thi is kaali rung'gut wali per hum tun mun apna haar chukey hum dil tuk os k ho aaey is lerki k mun mundir ki chao'khut khali khali thi is khali chau'khut k andur hum suret apni taank aaey hum moorut apni taank aaey jub subah ko haath m un dhoote hein balon mein kunghi kerte hein is lerki ko maloom howa chut choor kahein se aaya tha chao'khut mein moorut taank aaya pehley tao haeraan ankhoon se tasweer ko tukney mein mas'hoor howi ' masroor howi phir haath burha ker lerki ne tasweer nikali chao'khut se tasweer k tuk'rey chaar howe chut chaor tao akhir choor hi tha wuh goundh (=glue) kahein se ley aaya aur raat k ik san'nate mein is lerki tuk wuh aa pohuncha aur goundh laga k tukroon ko phir chao'khut pe chipka aaya wuh lerki at'thur lerki thi moorut ki qeemut kya jaaney surut ki qeemun kya jaaney tasweer ko os ne nooch lya aur dala os ko chooley mein tasweer tao jul k raakh howi chut choor bhi akhir insaan aur insaan bhi aur shayid bhi wuh raakh ikhati ker laya aur bhura os ko daamun mein lerki k dur per jaa pohuncha lerki k dil mein aa pohuncha serdi ki thundi raaton mein jub saari duniya sooti hai wuh lerki bahur bageechay mein soochon mein doobi beathi thi tasweer jula ker wuh lerki kuch heeran thi kuch nadum thi phir aik din subah saweeray hi shayir k dur jaa pohunchi aur booli apney shayir se "TASWEER NAHI TAO GHUM NAH KERO IS CHAO'KHUT PE TUM SAJH JAO IS DIL MERE AA BEATHO S ASLI SURUT K HOTE MAIN NUQLI SURUT NA LOONGI" [/b][/quote] /good |
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#176
07-17-2003, 07:45 AM
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Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Inhe paane ki dhun mein har tammana bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Tum apni meheki meheki zulf ke paichon ko kam kardo Musaafir in mein gir kar apna raasta bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Humain apni kasam hum har sahaara bhool jaate hain Tumhaare narm-o-naazuk honth jis dum muskuraate hain Bahaarain jainpti phool khilna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Bohot kuch tumse kehne ki tammana dil mein rukhte hain Magar jub saamne aate ho to kehna bhool jaate hain Mohobbat mein zubaan chup ho to aankhain baat karti hain Ye keh deti hain wo baatain jo kehna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain |
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#177
07-17-2003, 07:47 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Inhe paane ki dhun mein har tammana bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Tum apni meheki meheki zulf ke paichon ko kam kardo Musaafir in mein gir kar apna raasta bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Humain apni kasam hum har sahaara bhool jaate hain Tumhaare narm-o-naazuk honth jis dum muskuraate hain Bahaarain jainpti phool khilna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Bohot kuch tumse kehne ki tammana dil mein rukhte hain Magar jub saamne aate ho to kehna bhool jaate hain Mohobbat mein zubaan chup ho to aankhain baat karti hain Ye keh deti hain wo baatain jo kehna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain [/b][/quote]very nice jee |
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#178
07-17-2003, 07:50 AM
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<!--QuoteBegin-NainTara+Jul 17 2003, 11:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Jul 17 2003, 11:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Inhe paane ki dhun mein har tammana bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Tum apni meheki meheki zulf ke paichon ko kam kardo Musaafir in mein gir kar apna raasta bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain dekh kar hum saari duniya bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Humain apni kasam hum har sahaara bhool jaate hain Tumhaare narm-o-naazuk honth jis dum muskuraate hain Bahaarain jainpti phool khilna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain Bohot kuch tumse kehne ki tammana dil mein rukhte hain Magar jub saamne aate ho to kehna bhool jaate hain Mohobbat mein zubaan chup ho to aankhain baat karti hain Ye keh deti hain wo baatain jo kehna bhool jaate hain Ye aankhain jub humain apni panaahon mein bulaati hain [/b][/quote]very nice jee [/b][/quote]husla afzai ka bahut bahut shukria... /flower |
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#179
07-17-2003, 08:10 AM
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Biya jee, another great topic! (y) Bohat lutf raha ANKHON par poetry paRhnay ka .. ik chota say hissa hamari jaanib say bhi iss bazm meiN qabool karaiN ~ <img src='http://web.urducorner.com:2/images/poetry/poems/46_2.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /> |
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#180
07-17-2003, 09:51 AM
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mohabbat se bhari nigaah-e-yaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon.. mein teri aankhon mein pyaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon maanoos raha faqat bezaari-o-besabri se aaj tak.. kabhi haasil dil ko sabr-o-karaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon har pal hai roshan meri aankhon mein tere ishq ka chiraagh.. yeh chingaari tuj mein bhi ek baar dekhna chaahtaa hoon darmaaN mila nahin mujhe marz-e-mohabbat ka taa-umr.. do roz tujhe bhi is rog se beemaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon kaati hai jaise hayaat bekasi-o-majboori mein maine.. tujhe bhi yun dar-ba-dar aur laachaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon kurbaan hai jaise meri har saans mera har pal tum pe .. do ghadi tujhe bhi muj pe nisaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon jo bhi mila woh dard-o-ranj de ke gayaa hai.. kisi roz magar koi gham-khwaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon aa ke jo phir na jaaye kabhi teri yaadoN ki tarah.. zindagi mein aisi bahaar dekhna chaahtaa hoon |
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