Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-dilruba+Jul 16 2003, 10:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (dilruba @ Jul 16 2003, 10:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> (l) (l) (l) (l) (l) (l) Chehre pai hasi cha jaati hai...
Aankhon main suroor aaa jaata hai
jub tum mujhe apna kehto ho
apne pai ghuroor aa jaata hai........
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dilruba .... buhat hi achey hein sara ashaar.. thnx for taking a part .. lplus ... sharing a good stuff wiv us

<!--QuoteBegin-mehraal+Jul 16 2003, 12:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (mehraal @ Jul 16 2003, 12:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> biha! hum sotailay hain kiya /sad /sad /sad /sad [/b][/quote]
tum sagi ho ????





























/ast jhoot nahi bolt e

<!--QuoteBegin-mehraal+Jul 16 2003, 12:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (mehraal @ Jul 16 2003, 12:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> samander main utarta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
teri ankhon ko parhta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
tumhara naam likhnay kee ijazat chin gayee jab se
koi bhee lafz likhta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
teri yaadon kee khushboo khirkiyon peh raqs kerti hain
teray ghum main sulagta hoon tau ankhain bheeg haati hain
main hans keh jhail laita hoon judaai kee sab rasmain
gallay jab iss keh lagta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
na jaanay ho gaya hoon iss qadar hassaas kab se
kisi se baat kerta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
woh sab guzray huay lamhaat mujh ko yaad aatay hain
tumharay khat jau parhta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
main saara din bohat masroof rehta hoon magar junhi
qadam chokhat per rakhta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
teray koochay se ab mera talluq wajbi sa hay
magar jab bhee guzarta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain
hazaron masuamon kee hukmarani hay dil per
wasi main jab bhee hansta hoon tau ankhain bheeg jaati hain [/b][/quote]
yeh meri sub se fav ghazal hai ... is ka hur shear hur lufz .. bas .. dil mein utarta hai .... maahi .. thnx yaar buhat acha intekhaab

<!--QuoteBegin-~Sunehri Yaadein~+Jul 16 2003, 02:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (~Sunehri Yaadein~ @ Jul 16 2003, 02:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Zindagi ki raah mein phir kisi ki talash thee..
derya to pass thaa phir bhi kiyon piyas thee..

jissay dhoonda sehraoon mein dewanoon ki tarah
mujhay kiya khaber thee woh dil ke pass thee...

jiss key deedaar ko yeh aankhain tarstee theen..
woh hawa ka ik jhonka thee woh ik ihsaas thee..

Uske anay ki iss dil ko koi khabar na thee magar..
uss kay aanay ki mujhay ik umeed thee ik aas thee..

Jiski her Dharrkan per Likh diya afsaana hum ne
woh mah jabeen jo meri zindagi ka safah-e-qirtaas thee. [/b][/quote]
@};- .... buhat achey

<!--QuoteBegin-innocent_girl19+Jul 16 2003, 06:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (innocent_girl19 @ Jul 16 2003, 06:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Majal kiski ke ankhain mila ke baat kare,
dilo ke shaher mai unki hakoomat aisi thi [/b][/quote]
/good

<!--QuoteBegin-Lowkii+Jul 12 2003, 10:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Lowkii @ Jul 12 2003, 10:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> JITNII ANKHEIN ACHI HOON HII ,MERI ANKHEIN HOON GII

JITNEY CHAHREY ACHEY HOON GEY ,MEREY CHAHREY HOON GEY

ITNI ANKHEIN

ITNEY CHAHREY

KESEY YAAD RAKHOO GEY




/flower [/b][/quote]
diary main note kar ke /peh /peh

<!--QuoteBegin-mehraal+Jul 17 2003, 03:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (mehraal @ Jul 17 2003, 03:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ~woh ankhain kaisee ankhain hain?~

woh ankhain kaisee ankhain hain
jinhain ab tum chaha kertay ho!
tum kehtay thay
meri ankhain itni sachi ,itni achi hain
iss husn aur sachayee keh siwaa,dunya main koi cheez nahin
kiya un ankhon ko daikh keh bhee
tum faiz ka misrah parhtay ho?
tum kehtay thay
meri ankhon kee neelaahatt itni gehri hay
"meri rooh agar ik baar utar jaye tau uss kee poor poor neelam ho jaye"
mujhe itna bataao
aaj tumhari rooh ka rang pairahan kiya hay
kiya woh ankhain bhee samander hain?
yeh kaali bhoori ankhain
jinn ko daikh keh tum kehtay thay
"yoon lagta hay shaam ne raat keh hont peh hont rakhay hain"
kiya un sooraj doobnay ka lamha, un ankhon main bhee thehar gaya
ya wahan faqt mehtaab tarashtay rehtay hain?
meri palkain
jin ko daikh ker tum kehtay thay
in kee chaaon tumharay jism peh apni shabnam phaila day
tau guzartay khuwaab keh mausam laut aayen
kiya woh palkain bhee aisee hain
jinhain daikh keh neend aajaati ho?
tum kehtay thay
meri ankhain yunhi achi hain
"haan kajal kee dhundlayee huee tehreer bhee ho-tau
baat bohat dilkash hogee!"
woh ankhain bhee singhaar tau kerti hon gee
kiya un ka kajal khud hee mitt jaata hay?
kabhee yeh bhee huaa
kisi lamhay tum se rooth ker woh ankhain ro deen
aur tum ne apnay haath se un keh anksu khushk kiye
phir jhuk ker un ko choom liya
(KIYA UN KO BHEE!!) [/b][/quote]
MEHRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL ... CHAA GAYI HO TUSSI ..CHA AGAYI HO /clap ... kasme hai buhat pyari nazum hai ... ufff ... main ne save kerli hai /ura

mujhay yeh samajh nahi ati hai ke shair-o-shairi main akhir girls hi ziada kiun hoti hain?? ladkay kiun nahin?? /thinking

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:'(

<!--QuoteBegin-JiNN+Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (JiNN @ Jul 17 2003, 11:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> mujhay yeh samajh nahi ati hai ke shair-o-shairi main akhir girls hi ziada kiun hoti hain?? ladkay kiun nahin?? /thinking [/b][/quote]
yeh aik nayi post start kereing ... waisey yeh main bhi sooch rahi thi ... ajeeb baat hai na ... mager sahyid lerkiyoon k paas waqt faltoo hota hai ) ... aur lerke jazbaati nahi hote,.. pata nahi jin bhai :-s