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unki ankhein ay khay rahi hain adam
hum per tasneef aik kitab karo
Hunyna

<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 13 2003, 08:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 13 2003, 08:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Cute_gal+Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Cute_gal @ Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ye bhi mumkin hai rahon ankk mein ansoo ki tarha
yeh bhi mumkin hai kabhi yaad na aaon us ko [/b][/quote]
well .. aap pa ju pehla shear hai wuh bhi mera fav hai infact washi shah ki wuh puri ghazal hi meri all time fav rahi hai .. aur dosra shear bhi buhat aala buhat khubsuret .. ashaar ki yehi khaas baat hai k do linoon mein bas tabahi hi hai tabahi [/b][/quote]
thnx for da appriciation...;;)

~woh aag ho keh rang,huwaida koi tau ho
ankhain taras gayee hain tamasha koi tau ho

~ankhon main chubh gayee teri yaadon kee kirchiyan
kandhon peh ghum kee shaal hay aur chand raat hay

<!--QuoteBegin-DIL+Jul 14 2003, 07:51 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (DIL @ Jul 14 2003, 07:51 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Raat kee satha pay ubhray terey chehray kay naqoosh
Wohi chup chaap see aankhain wohi saada see nazar
Wohi dhalka howa aanchal wohi raftaar kaa khum
Wohi reh reh kay lachakta howa nazuk paiker

Tu merey pass na thee phir bhi seher honay tak
Tera her saans merey jism ko choo kar guzraa
Qatraa qatraa terey deedaar kee shabnam tapki
Lamha lamha teri khushboo say muat'tar guzra [/b][/quote]



/weldone /good Dil

bohat achay /flowers /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 14 2003, 09:52 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 14 2003, 09:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Sawan+Jul 14 2003, 06:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sawan @ Jul 14 2003, 06:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->

Yeh Jo Fiza Noord Hai Ankhon Kay Paar Chand
Bhichray Howaon Ka Dard Hai, Ankhon Kay Paar Chand

Utra Tha Ik Ajeeb Sa Khadsha&nbsp; Milan Ki Raaat
Ab Tak Kahin Pay Zard Hai, Ankhon Kay Paar Chand

Andhi Koi Thehar Si Gai Hai Fizaon Main
Shab Phir Say Gard Gard&nbsp; Hai, Ankhon Kay Paar Chand

Shaid Who Phir Udass Raha Hai Tamam Shabb
Daikho To Kitna Sard Hai, Ankhon Kay Paar Chand

Phaili Hai Yoon Tumhari Muhabbat Kay Ab Hamain
Har Soo Har Aik Fard Hai, Ankhon Kay Paar Chand





;;)&nbsp; ;;)&nbsp; ;;)&nbsp; ;;)&nbsp; ;;) [/b][/quote]
sawan buhat hi khoob ..... aap ki choice ki tao main waise hi punkhaa hoon ;;) [/b][/quote]


thanks A lot Biya ;;) /flowers

bharkaain mairi piyas ko aksar teri ankhain
sehra maira chehra hai samandar teri ankhain

phir kon bhala daad-e-tabasum unhain day ga
roein gi bohat mujh say bichar kar teri ankhain

bojhal nazar ati hain bazahir mujhay laikhin
khulti hain bohat dil main utar kar teri ankhain

ab tak mairi yaadon say mitaye nahi mit-ta
bheegi howi ik shaam ka manzar teri ankhain

mumkin ho to ik taza ghazal aur bhi keh lon
phir aurh na lain khawab ki chadar teri ankhain

main sang sift aik hi rastay main khara hon
shaid mujhay daikhain gi palat kar teri ankhain

yon daikhtay rehna usay acha nahi mohsin
woh kanch ka paikar hai to pathar teri ankhain




/flowers /flowers ;;) ;;) ;;) ;;)

<!--QuoteBegin-Sheeza+Jul 14 2003, 12:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sheeza @ Jul 14 2003, 12:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> hasrat hai UN ko kabhi nazdeek say daikhain
nazdeek hoo to aakh uthayi nahi jati
chahat pay bas chalta nahi kisi ka
lag jati hai yeh aag
lagayi nahi jati (l) [/b][/quote]
/good

<!--QuoteBegin-Cute_gal+Jul 14 2003, 09:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Cute_gal @ Jul 14 2003, 09:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Biya+Jul 13 2003, 08:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Biya @ Jul 13 2003, 08:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Cute_gal+Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Cute_gal @ Jul 13 2003, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> ye bhi mumkin hai rahon ankk mein ansoo ki tarha
yeh bhi mumkin hai kabhi yaad na aaon us ko [/b][/quote]
well .. aap pa ju pehla shear hai wuh bhi mera fav hai infact washi shah ki wuh puri ghazal hi meri all time fav rahi hai .. aur dosra shear bhi buhat aala buhat khubsuret .. ashaar ki yehi khaas baat hai k do linoon mein bas tabahi hi hai tabahi [/b][/quote]
thnx for da appriciation...;;) [/b][/quote]
no prob babez