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<!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><cen ter> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> </font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#ADA96E'>i never knew yeh aap k shear hein...



buhat khubsuret atif bhai <!--emo&--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim01.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/hug--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe96.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/hug'><!--endemo--> .. <!--emo&--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim01.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''><!--endemo--> BUHAT HI KHOOB AS USUAL <!--emo&--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim01.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#810541'>Atif
nice 2 see u here <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->

app ke sign mein bhi yehi qata perha tha uss waqt bhi acha laga tha our ab bhi <!--emo&:-)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/regular_smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':-)'><!--endemo-->

share kertey rehnaa <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#000000'><b> <span style='color:"b56aff "'>Bohat Khoob ... bohat hi achey <!--emo&(flower)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flowerface.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='(flower)'><!--endemo--> xthanx 4 sharin <!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo-->





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<!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><cen ter> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> </font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#0000FF'><!--emo&(pak)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/pak.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='(pak)'><!--endemo--> Asalam-0-Alikum

kasay hain aap Bhai jee ...

Bhai jee Bohut hi Allaa...

MASHAH ALLAH aap jab bhi likhte ho kamal karte ho .... <!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo-->

<b>Bhai jee Pehla Shair tu Afaat hai Zabar10 ... har LAFZ aise hai ke jaise kisi ne Moti aik LARI main Peero diye hoon ....

Dosra Shair acha hai .. Pehla misra tu Ghazib dha raha hai .. haan par................. .

aap ko kuch bhi kehna Soruj ko Chiragh dekhane ke Motradif ho ga par Bhai jee 2nd Misre main "SAKTA" feel hota hai &nbsp;aur misra bhi "BAHAR" say kharij hai ... WAZAN ki kami ke bayes yeh Misra pehlay 3eno misroon wala Ta-Asur chorne main nakam raha hai ...

Aisa sirf mera khyal hai zaroori nahi ke aisa hi ho ...

Aap ke liye Dua Go ..... KASHIF </b></font>

<!--QuoteBegin--takdirkafasana+April 24 2003,06:38--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (takdirkafasana @ April 24 2003,06:38)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><!--emo&/clapping--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim35.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/clapping'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&/clapping--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim35.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/clapping'><!--endemo--> ....... bohot zabardast x<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--> x<!--emo&@};---><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flower2.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='@};-'><!--endemo--> hamesha ki tarah x<!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo-->

Wada phir wada hai main zeher bhi pee jaoun Qateel
Shart yeh hay koi banhoon main sambhalay mujh ko ..


apki tabedar shagirda
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<font color='#000080'><b> Bohat Shukriya Shagirda ghazal ke pasandeedgi ka.
Shair bhee bohat aala sher kia. Jawaban sher likhta hooN,
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Uss ne hansi hansi main muhababt ke baat kee
Ham ne ADEEM uss ko mukernay nahin diya </center>

Keep reading my posts.
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Aatif </b></font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Decent-Dost+April 24 2003,07:08--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Decent-Dost @ April 24 2003,07:08)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><center> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> [/b][/quote]
Salamz,
x x x x x Gr8 post janab ,keep going,. <!--emo&/moujmasti--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div357.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/moujmasti'><!--endemo--></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'><b> Thanx DD for ur appreciation.
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Aatif </b></font>

<!--QuoteBegin--soni kudi+April 24 2003,17:20--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (soni kudi @ April 24 2003,17:20)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><center> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> [/b][/quote]
a-o-a

bohat hi achi lagi mujhe aap ki post <!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'><b> Thanx soni kudi &nbsp;<!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--> </b></font>

<!--QuoteBegin--*SaWan*+April 24 2003,22:54--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (*SaWan* @ April 24 2003,22:54)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><center> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> [/b][/quote]
<b>
x x Bohat Zabardast Aatif bhai... x<!--emo&(flower)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flowerface.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='(flower)'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&(flower)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/flowerface.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='(flower)'><!--endemo--> x/flower

Mairay Sabar per koi ajar kia, meri pehar pay koi abar kiun
xMujhay aurhnay day Azeeyatain , Meri Aadatain na kharab kar

Ahooooooo</b></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'> Thanx Sawan Behna!
Zaber10 shair share kia aap ne,
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Na samaatooN main tapish ghulay na nazer ko waqf-i-azaab ker
Jo sunai day ussay chup sikha, jo dikhai day ussay khawaab ker </center>

Yeh mairay favorite Mohsin Naqvi ka kalam hai.
Khush Rahin,
Aatif </font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Bheegi Shaam+April 25 2003,00:05--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Bheegi Shaam @ April 25 2003,00:05)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'>buhat khoob T_M

Aankhein khuli hain, to jaag uthi hasaratein taamam
Us ko bhi kho diya, jisey paya tha khawab main..

Zabardast x<!--emo&--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim01.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''><!--endemo--></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'> Thanx for liking mywork Bheegi Shaam. And also thanx for shairng that beautiful sher,

<center>
Guzer gai hain jo khushboo-i-raigaaN ke tarah
Woh chand roz mairi zindagi ka hasil thay </center>

Regards,
Aatif </font>

<!--QuoteBegin--Innocent Devil+April 25 2003,01:27--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (Innocent Devil @ April 25 2003,01:27)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><font color='#000000'><!--QuoteBegin--tanha_musafir+April 24 2003,04:40--><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0"><tr> <td>Quote (tanha_musafir @ April 24 2003,04:40)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin--><center> <font color=green>
Mairi Ungli Pakar laina mujhay tanha nahin kerna
Yeh duniya aik maila hai tumhain khonnay se derta hoon

Yeh jab se khawaab daikha hai mujhay tum chor jati ho
Main ab derta hoon khwaaboon se, main ab sonay se derta hoon x</center> [/b][/quote]
Great one atif bhai .....

very nice ...... <!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--> x<!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--> x<!--emo&/flowers--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/liebe85.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/flowers'><!--endemo--></font>[/b][/quote]
<font color='#000080'> Thanx Sis for liking my effort.
Regards,
Aatif </font>