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Originally Posted by HijjAr  Aap Ney jo Shair Likha hAi wO Sahi Nahien hAi Sahii Kiye Daita hOn Umeed hAi Mind Nhien Karien Gey Sab Kay hOnton Pey TabaSum Tha Meray Qtal Kay Baad
Janay Kya SOch Kay rOta Rha Qatil tAnhA |
of course I don't mind
aap ne shair sahi to kar diya, os ke liye bohot shukriya, leken pehle misre mai
wo khaas maza nahi raha, doosra misra zabardast ho gaya, pehle ke bare mai
sochna pade ga, thanks... oh yaa, by the way, i'm from Afghanistan yaar, itna
bhi karta hon tou mere khayaal mai kuch bora nahi hai, urdu shairy se bohot lagao
hai,anyway, thanks alot