Urdu Poetry Forum

**Girl_Interrupted** · #21 03-07-2005, 01:46 AM

welcome sweety

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nice to know abt you /grinsmile

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Originally Posted by sweet_2_b_4got10

1. Mera mukammal naam Sana Aslam, date of birth 21st March 1986, aur main Dubai main paeda huwee.

2. Mera naam meri ammi nay rakha aur iskay mainay hain tareef, ghoorna, dekhna

3. heheheh.. nahi main shadi shuda nahi hoon aur kab tak irada hai yeh main bhi nahi janti bass dua hai INSHALLAH jis waqt honi hai us waqt ho jayaygeee yeh sab naseeb ki baat hai AMEEN @};-

4. Mere ghar main 6 family members hain 3 bhai aur main ek hi behn aur mera sab say last number

5. Main Canada main hoon aur kya kar raheee hoon main parh rahee hoon..apnay college kay prequisite courses hain major english and maths kay courses complete kar raheee hoon...future plans well plan to yehi hai kay INSHALLAH usi field main graduation karoon jis main mera dil karta hai relating an art field aur INSHALLAH zaroor ussi main hi graduation karoongee ;;)

6. hmmm Hallagulla maine kaisay join kiya to jee huwa aisay kay i recieved loadsa mails from the admins abt the forum us waqt mujhay yeh maloom nahi tha kay forum kya hota hai and whats it purpose khair mujhay hallagulla ki taraf say kafi mails ayeen aur ek din socha kyun na dekhoon yeh kya hai aur jee woh din hai aur aaj ka din hai yahin hoon aur mere khayal main kuch cheezon ka ek khaas waqt mukarrar hai unhay jis waqt hona chahiyay woh us waqt ho jati hain

7. Mujhay Hg kay saray forum hi achay lagtay hain keh saktay hain im an all-rounder in sections main ek section main nahi rehtee dosray sections zaroor check karti hoon so ek khaas section mera koi favourite nahi hai i like all the sections of hg

8. Shairi kab shuru ki :-p well meri ek adat hai main har cheez ko try karkay dekhna chahti hoon ussay kartay huay mehsoos karna chahti hoon kay can i really do that work do i have that specific skill that can make me do that work i wanna do...to shairi kay lehaaz say main yeh kahoongee kay yeh shawkiya hai koi reason is kay shuru honay ki nahi hai meri tabiyat yaan kehlain nature aisi hai kay when i feel like writing something yaan kisi cheez ko dekh kar inspire hon to likhti hoon ek aur wajah mere shairi likhnay ki yeh bhi hai kay sometimes i reflect my feelings or whatever thats in my heart through writing yaan sometimes in the face of painting or a sketch so shairi bass ek shawk hai mera acha lagta hai shairi likha ;;)

9. Inspire well meri poetry amooman zara " KHUSHEE" walay mazameen par yaan MOHABBAT ki mazmon par based hoti hai well mere khayal main hum jitna bhi chahain inspire ho jayain kisi cheez say hum ussay mukammal torr par alfazon main bayaan nahi kar saktay kyunkay kuch jazbaat hi aisay hotay hain kay unki mukammal tafseeel likhna na mumkin hai jaisay kay khushee yaaan pyaar so main inspire apnay mahol say hoti hoon logon kay halaat say bhi.

10. Well frankly speaking mujhay khud bhi nahi pata kay mujhay apni aisi konsi nazam hai jo pasand hai meri har poetry ka genre different hota hai so is baat ko batana zara mushkil hai kay mujhay apni collection main konsi poetry zyada pasand hai yaan keh saktay hain for the time being i feel i havent written a poem yet jissay main kahoon kay yeh mujhay bahut pasand hai.;;)

11. Pasandeeda kitaab...hmmm main kitabain bahut kam parhati hoon mostly articles yaan novel yaan short stories parhati hoon aab urdu ki short stories main jo novel nigaar hain unkay naam mujhay nahi atay main bass kahaniyaan parhati hoon jo bahut achi lagain..

Pasandeeda shair...ohooo yeh to jee bass kya kahoon main well jab school main thee to Alama Iqbal ki parhi thee aur Altaf hussain haali ki shairi ki tasree ki thee lekin school main sirf itna hi hamara urdu ka syllabus hota tha wahan shairi parhanay ka koi khaas topic shamil nahi isi liyay mujhay bilkul nahi pata konsay shair hain aur unka konsa kalaam hai

Nazam pasandeeda to jeee nazmain sari aisi likhtay hain kay woh bahut achi hoti hain aur main ek pasandeeda nazam kaisay bataoon ek nazam pasand karna mere liyay zara mushkil hai isi liyay nazam main sari bahut pasand karti hoon koi specific nahi

Aur shair...hmm jee to mujhay ek shair kafi pasand aya tha pichlay dinon meri sweet si cheeni chanda nay /blush6 mujhay us site kay baray main bataya mujhay woh shair kafi cha laga kafi dair mera siggy bhi raha woh tha:

" MAT MUSKURAO ITNA KAY PHOOLON KO KHABAR LAG JAYAY
KAY KARAIN WOH TAREEF TUMHARI AUR TUMHAY NAZAR LAG JAYAY"@};-

12. shair ka kalaam /khikhi jeee mujhay shair main kisi shair ka kalaam nahi ata kabhi parha hi nahi aur nasar sach main apko bataoon mujhay yeh nasar ka bhi nahi pata yeh sab sikhaya jata hai students ko jo shairi letay hain as a subject lekin sach main mujhay nasar ka bhi nahi pata bass sab ko poems aur shairi keh deti hoon yaan koi stanzas lekin koi shair ka kalaam mujhay nahi ata.

13. Shairi likha mere hisaab main kafi mushkil hai shairi aisi hoti hai mere nazar main kay kuch to apko samjh ajati hai kuch apko bilkul samjh nahi ati...shairi ek aisa style hai jismain kuch alfazon ki tarteeb aisi rakhi gayee hai kay unka mainay apko pura shair parhanay kay baad samjh ata hai jaisay koi nazam hoti hai ap ek do stanzas parhain apko pata lag jata hai haan is poetry ka subject of talk yeh hai shairi aisi hai kay u will only understand till u reach the end...Mujhay nazam shairi ghazal sab pasand hai saron kay roop alag hain saron ka andaaz alag hai so again no favourites sari apni jagah ek important status hold karti hain.@};-

14. Hallagulla par kis ka kalaam main bahut shawk say parhati hoon well waisay to saron ka parhati hoon aisi baat nahi kay nahi maine sirf aik hi insan ka parhana hai main topic title say bahut attract hoti hoon to jee saron ki shairi parhati hoon..aab kis ka kalaam well Shanijee bahut achi nazamain likhtay hain unki poems aisa kehlain urdu vocabulary main mushkil nahi hoti especially mere liyay kyunkay MASHALLAH say hg main talent bahut hai sab bahut acha likhtay hain lekin kuch alfaaz bahut zara mushkil istamaal kartay hain jo inki poems ka genre aksar bahut different hota hai all rounding mooods par poems likhtay hain khushee, ghum, happiness, tension@};- aur ek aur POISON GIRL nilly baji mere cute si sis yeh bhi bahut achi poems likhti hain aksar revolving around a persons feelings yaaan kisi hadsay kay after effescts par bahut achi nazam likhti hain

15. Pasandeeda jagah well abhi filhaal to mera Pakistan janay ko bahut bahut bahut zyada dil kar raha hai mujhay abhi ticket mil jayay main urr kar chali jaoon i cant describe how much i wanna visit Pakistan kafi dair ho gayee hai nahi gayeee and now i really feel like going..aur konsi jagah jahan aaj tak janay ki kehlain koshish ki thee lekin nahi gayee woh thee jee murree main grade 2 say is khawahish main hon kay murree jaoon lekin aaaj tak na jaa saki ek murree aur ek mujhay lahore kay saray sheher ghoomnay hain maine lahore totally nahi dekha huwa sirf shahi qilla, Badshahi Masjid, aur Anarkali aur apnay bahir wali road aur rishtaydaron kay ghar dekhain hain lekin uskay ilawa aur kuch nahi dekha so bahut shawk hai lahore ghoomnay ka ;;)

16. hmmm mujhay baarish ka mausam bahut bahut bahut pasand hai main baarish ko dekh kar bahut khush hoti hoon yeh aisa mausam hai jis kay anay say aisa lagta hai sab kuch naya naya dhul gaya ho aur saari dunya aisi saafi suthreee nazar ati hai kay bass bahut khoobsurat lagta hai woh khushboo jo baarish ki hoti hai aur woh har boondh jo zameen par girti hai makes the whole aura of the place amazingly wonderful...mood par to jee acha khasa asar hota hai/blush6 i feel extremely energetic and happy

17. libaas kay mamlay main to jee main hamesha simple libaas main hoti hoon bass kabhi kahin bahir jana ho yaan koi function ho to thora tayaar hoti hoon lekin itna kuch khaas nahi saadgi zyada achi lagti hai....Main kaisay mizaaj ki malik hoon well main hansmukh hoon mujhay kafi hassi ati hai im a kind of person jiskay moun par ek smile hamesha hoti hai im not rude im never rude infact mujhay yaad karna parta hai when was the last time i got angry :-p jolly hoon jovial hoon khush rakhna aur khush rehna pasand karti hoon waisay yeh to main bata rahee hoon baaki yeh sawal to mere doston say poochna chahiyay woh is ka jawab acha day saktay hain.

18. Mera pasandeeda rung to jee mera pasandeeda rung hai PINK. I love the color pink bahut hi sensitive aur cute sa meetha meetha sa color hai no matter aaap kisi bhi occasion par jayain yaan ghar par rahain yaan kahin bhi jayain a pink dress in ur wardrobe or closet always adds a little cuteness to ur nature :-p. Jee rung hamari zindagi main bahut ahmiyat rakhtay hain har rung apnay saath ek alag sa mood carry karta hai jaisay green for calmness black for sadness red for shaitan:-p i mean naughty yaan romantic...and so on white for peace so in my view we set colours according to our mood

19. Woh kamha jo main chahti hoon laut kar ajayay to woh yehi hai kay i wish mera woh ek din ajayay..woh tha jab main Dubai say Canada hamesha kay liyay shift ho rahee thee i always adored my english teacher Anita George aur woh ek bahut achi insan hain aur bahut hi zabardast english teacher theen, when the last report day arrived main khaas unsay milna chahti thee lekin she was absent that day she meant a lot to me and she was one teacher my whole class would agree who understood us so i really wish i could just get one chance to meet her.

Aur konsay say lamhay kay intezar main hoon....well is sawal kay saath ek personal question added hai well woh khaas lamha jiskay intezar main main hoon uskay liyay main din raat duaain kar rahee hoon aur mujhay bahut yaqeen hai ALLAH TALA par kay INSHALLAH meri duaa zaroor kabool hogi aur woh khoobsurat lamha INSHALLAH meri zindagi main dhairon khushiyaan layayga so im praying for it and would like everyone to pray for me that whatever i hope for wish for comes true AMEEN @};-

Aur woh lamha jo main bhoolna chahti hoon...well when my mother faced a lot of difficuilties regarding her health hum bahut chotay thay we saw a lot and i just pray i forget it i know i cant forget the past it has many memories with it lekin yeh main bhoolna chahoongee, cause it made me see someone whom i loved in a lot of difficuilty @};-