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This is a discussion on Khamoshi....!! within the Aik Lamha forums, part of the Urdu Poetry by Poets of HallaGulla category; Assalam-0-Alaikum @};- Aik nazm paish-i-khidmat hay.... Aap ki araa'a ka intizaar rahay ga khaamoshi..!! zubanaiN gung bhi ho jayeN.. to ...
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#1
03-22-2006, 06:17 PM
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Assalam-0-Alaikum @};- Aik nazm paish-i-khidmat hay.... Aap ki araa'a ka intizaar rahay ga 1.gif ")1")  khaamoshi..!! zubanaiN gung bhi ho jayeN.. to nazraiN chup nahin rehteeN.. ke jazboN ko ma'aani ke pehnaway... dainay walay sab ke sab alfaaz kahiN kho bhi jayeN to gham-e-dil ki sisakti aah..bapa tufaan rakhti hai zubanaiN gung bhi ho jayeN to kanoN main bhatakti si meri bay jan khaahish ki sanam woh aakhri hichki bohat halkaan rakhti hai... mujhe pehroN rulati haiN..teri pur soz nigahaiN tera khamosh sa maatam mere jeenay ki tamanna..... mere marnay ka woh aalam... kahaN alfaaz ki mohtaaj hoti haiN, kaho aahaiN ?? ke tum ne bhi saha hoga koi chup chaap sa lamha.. koi khaamosh sa woh pal, ke sadiyoN pe jo bhaari ho... kabhi woh talkhi-e-doraaN ke zehar say bhi kaari ho... musaafir..sun !! safar khaamosh bhi reh lay to bolaiN gi katthin rahaiN... zubanaiN gung bhi ho jayeN to nazraiN chup nahin rehteeN...! utha rakhti hai hangamay.. mere humdam..mere humdam..!! khaamoshi..chup nahin rehti...!!!
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#2
10-14-2006, 09:32 PM
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bahut khoob shukriya...
__________________ Where are the Muslim people's sponsors? Where are its kings? Where are its leaders? The Muslim people is calling upon you, Jerusalem is appealing to you, will anyone answer? Sheikh A. Yassin |
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#4
10-20-2006, 01:52 PM
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Bohat achi nazm hai 
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#5
11-17-2006, 10:55 AM
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utha rakhti hai hangamay.. mere humdam..mere humdam..!! khaamoshi..chup nahin rehti...!!! bohat hi khoob soart bohat hi nazuk si kahmoshi thanks for shairing
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#6
11-21-2006, 03:49 PM
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safar khamosh b rah lay to bolayin gi khtan rahyin zabardast
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#7
02-15-2007, 10:16 AM
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****shandaar post hai janab …****
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#8
03-09-2007, 06:02 PM
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safar khamosh b rah lay to bolayin gi khtan rahyin ... Musafir khamosh b rah lay to bolayin gi khatun rahain overall bohut hee nice nazum hay..bus jou line upper quote ki uss main aagar app instead of safar agar Musafir word use karain tou wt do u think..? anyways ur poem is hit n fit.. |
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04-01-2007, 09:29 AM
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Assalam-0-Alaikum; Abhi nazar parhi aap k iss mashwaray per..... agar safar ki jaga lafz musafir kerdiya jaye ga to Nazm rythm se out ho jaye gi....
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07-08-2007, 01:44 PM
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kahaN alfaaz ki mohtaaj hoti haiN, kaho aahaiN ?? ke tum ne bhi saha hoga koi chup chaap sa lamha.. koi khaamosh sa woh pal, ke sadiyoN pe jo bhaari ho... kabhi woh talkhi-e-doraaN ke zehar say bhi kaari ho.. awesome Lamho ...
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Khamoshi....!! 
