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Originally Posted by Crystal_thinking  safar khamosh b rah lay to bolayin gi khtan rahyin ... Musafir khamosh b rah lay to bolayin gi khatun rahain
overall bohut hee nice nazum hay..bus jou line upper quote ki uss main aagar app instead of safar agar Musafir word use karain tou wt do u think..?
anyways ur poem is hit n fit.. 1.gif ")1") |
Assalam-0-Alaikum;
Abhi nazar parhi aap k iss mashwaray per..... agar safar ki jaga lafz musafir kerdiya jaye ga to Nazm rythm se out ho jaye gi....