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This is a discussion on her bar jo tum ik naya khwab de jaty ho within the Abu bakar Shoaib Abbasi Sagar forums, part of the Poet A - E category; her bar jo tum ik naya khwab de jaty ho kia tum ne kabi socha hy tumhare in kahaboon ko ...
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06-26-2008, 08:54 PM
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her bar jo tum ik naya khwab de jaty ho kia tum ne kabi socha hy tumhare in kahaboon ko main dharkan bana rakhti hoon kabhi chupati hon dunya se kabhi ankhoown main sjaa rakhti hoon per jab ye khawab tot'tae hain in ki kirchian dil ko zakhmi kerti hain dil chup rahta hy per ankhain brasti hain main nahi kahti ky mujhe tarpaoo na per apne milan ka khawab mujhe de jaoo na kuin ke ye khawab talwar bun kae dasta hy dikha kay milan., intazar bun ke dasta hy
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08-24-2008, 09:58 PM
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Bahut khoob............ zabrdast..........  |
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#4
03-07-2009, 04:48 AM
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good but actually miss xyz talwar dasa nahin karti last lines mein zara gar bar kar di hai any how mein b poetry ka shok rakhta hun koi poetry likhne wala nahin may b k ap ne kuch soch kar likha ho. any how excellent.keep it up Share |
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#5
03-07-2009, 08:21 AM
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umda sharing ha Share keep it up 
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